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but, i love you
up tight
but all i wanna do
is blow your mind.
and i don't mean that metaphorically
i mean i want to take a gun
and
blow
your
mind
aw a y.
but all i wanna do
is blow your mind.
and i don't mean that metaphorically
i mean i want to take a gun
and
blow
your
mind
aw a y.
Published 17th Jun 2013
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17th Jun 2013 2:43am
sounds like twisted love to me...reminds me of my ex O_o...nice tiny piece though :-)
17th Jun 2013 4:52am
17th Jun 2013 2:41pm
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18th Jun 2013 00:40am
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20th Jun 2013 6:47pm
25th Jun 2013 00:24am
Harsh... So sorry I haven't been keeping up to date. My parents added parental controls against DUP for whatever reason (I swear that if you ask why you'll end up like the other guy at the end of this poem.... jk!) and now I have to sneak my tablet off to find free WiFi... it's a mess...
