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Summer in my Island Paradise
White sandy beaches along shorelines
greet the weary travellers
upon their arrival
relaxing moments
follow...
Swimming, parasailing and boating
will keep you fully occupied,
diving beyond coral reefs
gives you
thrills!
Summer
gives energy
to dormant souls
long crippled and wasted,
while the whole world watches.
Relaxation,
complete tranquility,
abundant fresh seafood,
as well as fruits and veggies of the season,
treatment like royalty--once in a lifetime experience!
greet the weary travellers
upon their arrival
relaxing moments
follow...
Swimming, parasailing and boating
will keep you fully occupied,
diving beyond coral reefs
gives you
thrills!
Summer
gives energy
to dormant souls
long crippled and wasted,
while the whole world watches.
Relaxation,
complete tranquility,
abundant fresh seafood,
as well as fruits and veggies of the season,
treatment like royalty--once in a lifetime experience!
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Re: Summer in my Island Paradise
14th Jun 2013 7:10am
Would love to be a queen taking a trip this summer to this beautiful Island Paradise you've depicted, EngrVV!
The imagery was so peaceful and inviting!
Lovely Ink! Xo
The imagery was so peaceful and inviting!
Lovely Ink! Xo
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re: Re: Summer in my Island Paradise
14th Jun 2013 7:21am
That's where I was born and spent my formative years. I guess I miss those days of exploration as a teen-ager! Thank you Rain...I bet you gonna love it there!
Re: Summer in my Island Paradise
14th Jun 2013 9:10am
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17th Jun 2013 5:17pm
There's no place like it Grace...I plan to retire there someday, and spend the rest of my life, writing and reading!
Re: Summer in my Island Paradise
14th Jun 2013 12:08pm
Sounds like such a beautiful inviting place Engr. Wonderful imagery and pen.
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re: Re: Summer in my Island Paradise
17th Jun 2013 5:18pm
Re: Summer in my Island Paradise
14th Jun 2013 1:36pm
Sounds so beautiful, I've been to a few lovely islands for brief holidays but to be born and grow up there? Wow, what a lucky dude!
Thanks for sharing this great descriptive piece mate.
Thanks for sharing this great descriptive piece mate.
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re: Re: Summer in my Island Paradise
17th Jun 2013 5:23pm
When we are already getting old, our mind is longing for a relaxing place to go but our flesh says no...we just keep on dreaming to be laid back and relaxing unmindful of the events around us. Ahh, I know the day will come!
Thank you mate...
Thank you mate...
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