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'Black Magic'
Xanthic candles
garishly twist, and burn
alighting faded shadows,
haunting seers
Thoughts mold into form,
bending smoke, to air
The light's glow,
with a crackle,
n' a heat's glare
felled by the rush
of this mystical magic
swiftly, waftin' thru mind's lair...
garishly twist, and burn
alighting faded shadows,
haunting seers
Thoughts mold into form,
bending smoke, to air
The light's glow,
with a crackle,
n' a heat's glare
felled by the rush
of this mystical magic
swiftly, waftin' thru mind's lair...
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Re: 'Black Magic'
13th Jun 2013 11:52am
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Lmao, love that 24/7 hot mind of yours lady lol
N yea, I'm happy it gives you pleasant thoughts
reading this inkspill :) thank you :)
N yea, I'm happy it gives you pleasant thoughts
reading this inkspill :) thank you :)
Re: 'Black Magic'
13th Jun 2013 1:05pm
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13th Jun 2013 1:30pm
Re: 'Black Magic'
13th Jun 2013 4:10pm
I love to dabble in the occult and the seer awakens in me often.
Love this ink Poetikmind.
Love this ink Poetikmind.
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re: Re: 'Black Magic'
14th Jun 2013 1:21am
Wow I do believe this is ur first 'love this ink' lol I'm flattered n honored sweetness! appreciate u :)
Re: 'Black Magic'
Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 4:53pm
You created a very haunting, creepy
scene of mystery, like what else
will come. The poem actually made
me feel like I was flowing upward
like the words you created..nice job.
scene of mystery, like what else
will come. The poem actually made
me feel like I was flowing upward
like the words you created..nice job.
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re: Re: 'Black Magic'
14th Jun 2013 1:23am
Thank u, I'm happy to hear you got such an effect from this
I appreciate ur time n kindness on my ink :)
I appreciate ur time n kindness on my ink :)
Re: 'Black Magic'
Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 5:24pm
Nice job....
I used to dabble in the occult
Then stopped because it worked
Good read
Thanks
Kitty
I used to dabble in the occult
Then stopped because it worked
Good read
Thanks
Kitty
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re: Re: 'Black Magic'
14th Jun 2013 1:35am
Wow you did? well please don't do any bad spell on me I wouldn't mind a good one though! lol thank u sweetie, appreciate it always :)
Re: 'Black Magic'
13th Jun 2013 5:52pm
Folks round' these parts and deep in the bayou state, believe in Black Magic!
I loved the depth of your description in this ink!
Nicely done my friend!
XO
I loved the depth of your description in this ink!
Nicely done my friend!
XO
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re: Re: 'Black Magic'
14th Jun 2013 1:32am
Yea those bayou folks taint nothin ta play wit! lol
thank u my dear sweetie :)
thank u my dear sweetie :)
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 8:17pm
A deep sense of the supernatural in this well-written piece. Some are more highly attuned to the supernatural realm. Others don't believe in anything that they cannot see etc. But once one has experienced events of a psychic nature etc., there is a 'knowing' that defies explanation. There are mystical/magical elements in the dreamworld, too. The list goes on. Just to say, how much I enjoyed reading your poem, Poetikmind! :)
*Peace & Love*
Carlene
*Peace & Love*
Carlene
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re: Re: 'Black Magic'
14th Jun 2013 1:47am
Well can't say I know anything about it BUT i always did found it interesting... Thank u so much my friend :)
Re: 'Black Magic'
Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 00:05am
Haunting words, cher. Can feel the magic in the air.
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14th Jun 2013 1:52am