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Eat Me
Sweet like banana cream pie
you eat me until I'm dry
slurping up every drop
it's hard for you to stop
your fingers wiggle inside
your tongue slithers and glides
nibbling on my sensitive bean
swirling around like a machine
you love my cream on your face
your tongue giving it a chase
you eat me until I'm dry
slurping up every drop
it's hard for you to stop
your fingers wiggle inside
your tongue slithers and glides
nibbling on my sensitive bean
swirling around like a machine
you love my cream on your face
your tongue giving it a chase
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Re: Eat Me
11th Jun 2013 1:53am
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11th Jun 2013 2:07am
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11th Jun 2013 2:07am
OMFG! Mmmmmmmm yea!!! lol direct, raw, hot, sexy flesh
imagery in words n pic... Wow lol
imagery in words n pic... Wow lol
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11th Jun 2013 2:25am
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 4:39am
Told with such imagery tl....strider

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11th Jun 2013 4:43am
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11th Jun 2013 4:48am
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 2:37pm
The imagery is fantastic. All that's missing is the mind blowing scent and the slightly tangy taste.

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11th Jun 2013 2:47pm
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 8:52pm
No, thank you!

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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 5:25pm
tommie,
...chasing a bean, chasing a bean...I love it!...oops back to work...chasing a bean...chasing a bean... ; )
...chasing a bean, chasing a bean...I love it!...oops back to work...chasing a bean...chasing a bean... ; )

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11th Jun 2013 8:19pm