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Time
temporal length
our birth, it's epoch
an era of one life
past, present, future
a priceless allotment
endless possibilities
moments we've seized
an eternity passes by
in the blink of an eye
perpetuity of time
true life after death
continuum in generations
span determined by blood
however, time goes on
our birth, it's epoch
an era of one life
past, present, future
a priceless allotment
endless possibilities
moments we've seized
an eternity passes by
in the blink of an eye
perpetuity of time
true life after death
continuum in generations
span determined by blood
however, time goes on
Published 10th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 9:49pm
I love the idea of this, and you wrote some very valid truths about the aspect of time.
However, I felt while reading that it was all just a list of ideas rather than a poem. Perhaps edit this slightly, and you could be cooking something special up.
However, I felt while reading that it was all just a list of ideas rather than a poem. Perhaps edit this slightly, and you could be cooking something special up.
10th Jun 2013 11:13pm
10th Jun 2013 10:23pm
We have an infinite number of things to do with only a finite time to do them... To bad it's not the other way around...
A nice thought provoking piece......
A nice thought provoking piece......
10th Jun 2013 11:14pm
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