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My Dear Annabelle. (inspired by Edgar Allen Poe and Alesana.)
My Annabelle, where have you gone?
You left me behind to wander in the fog
Your death tears at my soul
Biting and clawing, creating holes
How can this happen now?
So sudden, so unannounced...
News of your death is stirring the town
Sobering the sheep safe in their homes
Some cry, some scream,
But me, I sit in silence
unable to comprehend it.
My dear Annabelle, Why the fuck did you leave?
You left me behind to wander in the fog
Your death tears at my soul
Biting and clawing, creating holes
How can this happen now?
So sudden, so unannounced...
News of your death is stirring the town
Sobering the sheep safe in their homes
Some cry, some scream,
But me, I sit in silence
unable to comprehend it.
My dear Annabelle, Why the fuck did you leave?
Published 8th Jun 2013
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9th Jun 2013 12:08pm
9th Jun 2013 7:44pm
nothing "happened", this poem is inspired by Edgar Allen Poe's 'Annabelle Lee' and Alesana's album 'The Emptiness'.
12th Jun 2013 1:13am
The sorrow in the beginning, how it grows into anger and, to me, some denial, is really listless. It's curt but powerful and I like that you used both Alesana and Poe.
