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On Top
I feel you inside
you pulled me on top
I rode you so hard
you yelled, don't stop
I love this position
you inside so deep
I am getting so close
you are ready to seep
I pump up and down
you grip my hips
I slam really hard
bend to kiss your lips
I saturate you
you erupt with heat
I moan, more more
you don't miss a beat
I come apart again
you make me scream
I pant and sigh
you smile with gleam
I love being on top
you seem to enjoy it too
I wanna take one more ride
but babe, it's up to you
you pulled me on top
I rode you so hard
you yelled, don't stop
I love this position
you inside so deep
I am getting so close
you are ready to seep
I pump up and down
you grip my hips
I slam really hard
bend to kiss your lips
I saturate you
you erupt with heat
I moan, more more
you don't miss a beat
I come apart again
you make me scream
I pant and sigh
you smile with gleam
I love being on top
you seem to enjoy it too
I wanna take one more ride
but babe, it's up to you
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Re: On Top
8th Jun 2013 8:37am
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8th Jun 2013 6:12pm
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8th Jun 2013 6:14pm
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8th Jun 2013 6:23pm
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Forget the clothes, the food, the surroundings, this is up front and direct!
New use of a word for me here---don't think I have ever seen the word "seep" used in this context.
New use of a word for me here---don't think I have ever seen the word "seep" used in this context.
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re: Re: On Top
8th Jun 2013 6:27pm
direct and to the point
designed to make a man seep
lol
thanks for reading
designed to make a man seep
lol
thanks for reading
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8th Jun 2013 3:12pm
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8th Jun 2013 6:29pm
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8th Jun 2013 10:20pm
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9th Jun 2013 3:38pm
Rhyming comment, of both pic and poem:
This portrays a male fantasy -
Woman in the 'missionary'!
This portrays a male fantasy -
Woman in the 'missionary'!
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9th Jun 2013 5:15pm
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11th Jun 2013 00:58am
man
I sure did write quite a few while you were away
seems like an endless list of comments
thanks so much
I sure did write quite a few while you were away
seems like an endless list of comments
thanks so much