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Grave Digger
Syringe full of
Lullabies.
I caress her, sweetly.
Serrated tongues-
Twisting.
This coffin is too small for us.
Littered fairground smile,
Bloody holes-
(I faked it)
Lullabies.
I caress her, sweetly.
Serrated tongues-
Twisting.
This coffin is too small for us.
Littered fairground smile,
Bloody holes-
(I faked it)
Published 10th Nov 2010
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10th Nov 2010 5:44am
like this — no time to explain
"Syringe full of Lullabies" ... yum
the "(I faked it)" makes it
but the title... maybe something less literal
"Syringe full of Lullabies" ... yum
the "(I faked it)" makes it
but the title... maybe something less literal
10th Nov 2010 5:50am
The haiku are all random posts I had made for my Sex & Death Haiku thread, and I started out with that title so it was all coincidene. :) Thanks for reading.
10th Nov 2010 6:09am
Dirty and delicate. Once again, I need a shower.
"Serrated tongues" are so nostalgic. "I caress her, sweetly" presents an adverb, or it may be a term of addressing someone, or something. Maybe I'm misinterpreting. What ever the case, I ate it up.
The "Syringe" whispers of coercion and makes me regress to my roots in deconstructionism. It may just be ambivalence rather than coercion, but it's still sexy.
The final line is a zinger most appreciated.
Write on my plate and I'll eat your words any day.
"Serrated tongues" are so nostalgic. "I caress her, sweetly" presents an adverb, or it may be a term of addressing someone, or something. Maybe I'm misinterpreting. What ever the case, I ate it up.
The "Syringe" whispers of coercion and makes me regress to my roots in deconstructionism. It may just be ambivalence rather than coercion, but it's still sexy.
The final line is a zinger most appreciated.
Write on my plate and I'll eat your words any day.
10th Nov 2010 6:13am
Wow, you just gave me a brain-gasm with all those fancy words, mister, lol. :D Spanks so much! I try, I try....What if I were sitting on the plate? Would you still wanna eat then? Lol.
10th Nov 2010 6:20am
I smell a sitcom. I don't indulge in cannibalism, but favors may be overlooked and I'm always starved.
Sorry, that was my soul-hole. I live off of carbonated brown bubbly and The Golden Girls so you'll have to forgive me.....Well, it doesn't HAVE to be cannibalism....:P
