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Undeniable Rage
Damn thee, white!
I rage against thee in this glorious battle
Knowing thy superior disposition
I rage still in furious anger
Bent to destroy thee and all thy hands have made
Strength against strength
Might opposed might
Will destroying will
Thee will fall against my righteousness
Succumb to my desire to exterminate
Thee and thy seed from the memory
Of this glorious earth
Thy plot against me will fail
Being of Sun Tzu
I shall till the soil with thy bones and flesh
Making meat for the fauna's growth
While I make thy Queen my bitch
And thy court, my foot stool
But the greatest loss is the affliction
Of thy spirit in homage to me
In the joy of my greatest victory!
I've gotta stop playing this fucking computer chess game!
I rage against thee in this glorious battle
Knowing thy superior disposition
I rage still in furious anger
Bent to destroy thee and all thy hands have made
Strength against strength
Might opposed might
Will destroying will
Thee will fall against my righteousness
Succumb to my desire to exterminate
Thee and thy seed from the memory
Of this glorious earth
Thy plot against me will fail
Being of Sun Tzu
I shall till the soil with thy bones and flesh
Making meat for the fauna's growth
While I make thy Queen my bitch
And thy court, my foot stool
But the greatest loss is the affliction
Of thy spirit in homage to me
In the joy of my greatest victory!
I've gotta stop playing this fucking computer chess game!
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Re: Undeniable Rage
5th Jun 2013 2:54pm
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5th Jun 2013 3:05pm
I wish it was funny! If you have to be addicted to something, might as well be chess!
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5th Jun 2013 5:00pm
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5th Jun 2013 7:19pm
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5th Jun 2013 6:01pm
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5th Jun 2013 7:17pm
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2013 6:12pm
So.. it really wouldn't do to comment "it's just a game"?
Love how your frustration is vented here. Clever work. The twist of the last line - nice! Thanks for the laugh, Hawkdude!
Love how your frustration is vented here. Clever work. The twist of the last line - nice! Thanks for the laugh, Hawkdude!
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5th Jun 2013 7:20pm
Holy hell and damnation! A game!!!! Playing for the souls of mankind is a game! This is serious stuff here miss scat! Lol
Re: Undeniable Rage
6th Jun 2013 4:36am
I am a gamer and I told gamers all the time there's no game that is more brutal on your soul then chess. Can't blame it on a lag. Can't blame it on a bad call. Can't blame it on a teammate. Can't blame it on the environment. Can't say they were cheating. You have to look yourself dead in the eyes and say that person was better than me. If you play someone who is ranked higher than you, you will definitely loose and bore of them in the process.love it man
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6th Jun 2013 4:42am
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17th Jun 2013 5:17pm
"But the greatest loss is the affliction
Of thy spirit in homage to me
In the joy of my greatest victory!"<--I was like, "Whoa....what a wonderful ending!" Then you hit me with the twist! smh....:)
Of thy spirit in homage to me
In the joy of my greatest victory!"<--I was like, "Whoa....what a wonderful ending!" Then you hit me with the twist! smh....:)
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17th Jun 2013 8:27pm
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17th Jul 2014 5:16am
Exotic n compelling... for as dramatic apiece with intent, some grammar conduct would be wise! I understand the dynamic.. yet you left me in structure. the effort is there! keep grindin
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19th Jul 2014 2:55am