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walkabout
walking within the mist
I heard howling low animal growls
with this I pick up pace
wondering if Hell hounds on the trail
Eyes red concrete hold
keeping me still steadfast and bold
I curse the beast wanting blood
gathering earth with wetted palm I rise
Incantations Iron incentive
soulcrafting signed significant
to the teeming-
Mist~
atrous melanic drips
paint the exit
as I slipped
in fabric
folding
within
sense
this
bis
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zb-El0dFDzI
I heard howling low animal growls
with this I pick up pace
wondering if Hell hounds on the trail
Eyes red concrete hold
keeping me still steadfast and bold
I curse the beast wanting blood
gathering earth with wetted palm I rise
Incantations Iron incentive
soulcrafting signed significant
to the teeming-
Mist~
atrous melanic drips
paint the exit
as I slipped
in fabric
folding
within
sense
this
bis
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zb-El0dFDzI
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Re: walkabout
Anonymous
2nd Jun 2013 7:33am
nice work, soula..surreal! :-)
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Anonymous
2nd Jun 2013 12:09pm
Nice change-up from you soul...well done!
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2nd Jun 2013 3:35pm
"I rise Incantations Iron incentive
soulcrafting signed significant to the teeming-
Mist~"
one word: Magical!
Red
soulcrafting signed significant to the teeming-
Mist~"
one word: Magical!
Red
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re: Re: walkabout
2nd Jun 2013 4:25pm
So glad I didn't use a comma...sometimes they bug the hell out of me...little fallen eyelashes everywhere...So Very Kind Dear Red- I thank You!!!
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Anonymous
2nd Jun 2013 7:59pm
An incantation from other worlds...
Greatly written, Soul!
Greatly written, Soul!
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3rd Jun 2013 6:06pm
I love the structure!
I honestly don't know how you do it.
Wonderfully well written.
I honestly don't know how you do it.
Wonderfully well written.
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3rd Jun 2013 6:25pm
Thank You Dear Scribbler:)
It's this noggin upon my shoulders...it's set crooked!!!
It's this noggin upon my shoulders...it's set crooked!!!
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4th Jun 2013 4:51am
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4th Jun 2013 5:22am
:) I'm glad You Liked Dear Rain made me smile with that :) humbled always!!!