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Influenced
Influence,
Influenced
Taking memories from the bank of life
Cashing in on tales of strife
I feel these things
I feel it’s real
The raw, that grates
My nerves, churning muck
Feeling sick, I remember
Moving forward, come un-stuck
I am guilty
Yes it’s true
I cast my eye to the past,
Catching on like the flu
It’s deep, it’s fast and overwhelms
Taking its toll in deeds, disease
But I choose to move
Flow within the sea and be
Conspiracy; looming free
Deprive us of our destiny
Influenced
Taking memories from the bank of life
Cashing in on tales of strife
I feel these things
I feel it’s real
The raw, that grates
My nerves, churning muck
Feeling sick, I remember
Moving forward, come un-stuck
I am guilty
Yes it’s true
I cast my eye to the past,
Catching on like the flu
It’s deep, it’s fast and overwhelms
Taking its toll in deeds, disease
But I choose to move
Flow within the sea and be
Conspiracy; looming free
Deprive us of our destiny
Published 2nd Jun 2013
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Anonymous
2nd Jun 2013 11:59am
Very nice poem
Welcome to DUP New Member
Write on!
Kitty
Welcome to DUP New Member
Write on!
Kitty
Anonymous
2nd Jun 2013 2:44pm
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2013 7:25pm
I like it. I love that you summed up your darkness in life into meaningful metaphors, giving us just enough gist as to what you've been through.
Good write!
Good write!
4th Jun 2013 3:43am
