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Draft
IF cosplay ever
really catches
on and I am there
I think that I
will be a great big
cuddle teddy bear.
But if the thought
of being
in a costume
seems so daft
I'll settle
for a maid
who dresses up
like a giraffe.
Her boots
will show
how long her legs
can reach
into the sky
and then her skirt
will be so short
it almost hits
her thigh.
I love the coat
it looks like you
and is that
your Little tail?
It somehow
makes me think about
the rudder
for a sail.
I guess that
I'm just thinking
and this thought
is just a draft;
I wonder what
it would be like
to neck
with a giraffe.
runningturtle87
really catches
on and I am there
I think that I
will be a great big
cuddle teddy bear.
But if the thought
of being
in a costume
seems so daft
I'll settle
for a maid
who dresses up
like a giraffe.
Her boots
will show
how long her legs
can reach
into the sky
and then her skirt
will be so short
it almost hits
her thigh.
I love the coat
it looks like you
and is that
your Little tail?
It somehow
makes me think about
the rudder
for a sail.
I guess that
I'm just thinking
and this thought
is just a draft;
I wonder what
it would be like
to neck
with a giraffe.
runningturtle87
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Re: Draft
1st Jun 2013 3:16pm
Cool...hope it doesn't turn into Dr Do Little for you. Mind you you might get lucky with a 'pushmepullyou or is that just a blow to your ego'!
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re: Re: Draft
1st Jun 2013 3:49pm
No ego involved....friendly interloping engagement with a tall drink of water...a pet, a tender fellow sapio................
Anonymous
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re: Re: Draft
1st Jun 2013 3:51pm
I am working on a costume.....something intergalactic....Timelordish, and Steampunk.....Recovery was a path to falling over in reverse....
re: Re: Draft
1st Jun 2013 4:00pm
Different people are accessed through different pathways..for some, dressing up is their way to communicate who they are inside....
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1st Jun 2013 4:11pm
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re: Re: Draft
2nd Jun 2013 11:47am
I have actually had a giraffe lean into my car and eat from my hand.....tongue as big as my arm.....oh, my God!!!
Re: Draft
1st Jun 2013 5:59pm
Giraffes can be pesky, they neck a little too much some times, especially when confronted with cuddly teady bears. Interesting write....I wonder well those darn costumes are sold...y'know, if someone was so inclined...
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2nd Jun 2013 00:10am
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1st Jun 2013 11:56pm
Lol. sir i have a few things to say to you. first i have to tell you that you have to be one of the most compassionate men i've ever met. second your poetry is brilliant on every level.. you can go from pain and trauma to comedy with an inner meaning. i am in awe of you as a person and poet.. much respect.. and you never know til you try it...lol..
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2nd Jun 2013 00:12am
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2nd Jun 2013 7:09am
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2nd Jun 2013 11:50am
Pale, pastel, Little, and whimsy...a sapio who likes playful intellect and thirsty PDA...and long conversations.....to begin.