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I don't know really
We can sit here for hours
exchanging pleasantries
burning both ends of the candle
sipping our drink slow
to hold on to time
gazing up at the stars
never once looking into each others eyes
for eyes tell the truth
the windows to the soul
inside them hope can be seen
and dreams revealed
it's better that we stay focused
on the lies in our smiles
makes for an easier ending
exchanging pleasantries
burning both ends of the candle
sipping our drink slow
to hold on to time
gazing up at the stars
never once looking into each others eyes
for eyes tell the truth
the windows to the soul
inside them hope can be seen
and dreams revealed
it's better that we stay focused
on the lies in our smiles
makes for an easier ending
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Re: I don't know really
31st May 2013 7:11am
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31st May 2013 7:16am
Re: I don't know really
31st May 2013 1:53pm
Re: I don't know really
31st May 2013 6:37pm
"it's better that we stay focused
on the lies in our smiles"
clever pen, gigi, enjoyed it.
:)
on the lies in our smiles"
clever pen, gigi, enjoyed it.
:)
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Re: I don't know really
not that your company isn't always enjoyed ms. gg, but the space did you some good... your writing has become so concise...you get your idea across, without any wasted words, and you have this elegant sweep that is starting to come through...dig it mama
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31st May 2013 8:45pm
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Re: I don't know really
2nd Jun 2013 6:25am
Re: I don't know really
3rd Jun 2013 4:31pm
Much enjoyed poetry, I like the structure;
short sentences, lots of meaning.
:)
short sentences, lots of meaning.
:)
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Re: I don't know really
20th Sep 2013 4:32pm
I like this.This piece of work is profound. Your profile pic is pretty cool. It stands Out you possess a pleasant atmosphere and like the saying goes obviously easy on the eyes, no pun intended. your eyes are captivating so naturally one would be intrigued about your smile. can't focus on your lyin smile probably because your smile is not lying. sometimes I read into things too much or read between the lines when there aren't any but those words with your pic ard debonair
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24th Sep 2013 1:54pm