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INTO THE FLOW
folding in
to unfold
folding in
to fall
folding in
to mystery
surrendering
to it all
letting go
to feel
the flow
beyond
the fall
of all unknown
become
the flow
of the whole
let go of
all you know
to feel
to see
to grow
to be
the flow
of all unknown
you know
you really are
beyond the fall
of holding on
to all things
which you aren t
so let go
to feel
the flow
of folding in
to unfold
of folding in
to fall
of falling
into mystery
surrendering
to it all
Published 30th May 2013
| Edited 26th Dec 2024
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Anonymous
30th May 2013 10:56am
Yes flowing now oin!
thanks...strider
thanks...strider
30th May 2013 6:02pm
Thanks Strider, now if I could only discover a way to 'flow' as well & consistently in my 'real' (day to day) life!?!... (to flow on into & through it all!!!)...
- OIN
- OIN
30th Jun 2013 2:13am
30th Jun 2013 7:42am
Thanks gracedrops for your comment, it shed some new light on the broader meaning of my poem, which even as I wrote it & read it numerous times afterwards, it sounded right & good, but it's overall meaning still remained a little cryptic sounding & mystical to me, but your interpretation here has given me a little more insight & clarity into it's overall essence, which helps validate for me, what I sensed but could not pin-point or describe & that is that despite it's peculiar wording, it's message is simple, as you said in your response: to accept, to be (& to know!)... - "Much Appreciated!!!...
~ OIN
~ OIN
