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TREETOP
To climb a tree
and never come down
to stay up top
without a frown
to sit on a branch
just looking around
to talk to the birds
what a wonderful sound
to be king of the leaves
wearing my shiny crown
to climb a tree
do I really have to come down.
and never come down
to stay up top
without a frown
to sit on a branch
just looking around
to talk to the birds
what a wonderful sound
to be king of the leaves
wearing my shiny crown
to climb a tree
do I really have to come down.
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31st May 2013 6:37pm
Dude, this was EXCELLENT... Simply becuz it speaks stro fly of the power of imagination , very impressed!
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3rd Jun 2013 11:57pm
nostalgia is what I got from this, to b young and careless again and watch from a branch as the world bustles about. Nicely written and most enjoyed :)
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 00:53am
I love how you make such a huge impact on the imagination with so little words.
Less is more defo applies to your style..perfect!
Less is more defo applies to your style..perfect!
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