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I'm NOT a Thug...
I’m not a thug...
but you best believe I know one or two...
I’m not a thug,
but I’ve likely bruised some laws it's true
I’m not a thug...
n' even if I look that way, please don’t just assume
I’m not a thug...
though people tend get nervous just when I enter a room
If you take me for what I am,
then you’re doing better than most
Yeah, I’ve an aversion to the five-o,
n' whenever spotted... yo! I’m ghost!
I’m not a thug...
but busting your skull would suit me just fine
If the reason...
I’m doing so, is because you’ve violated me, or mine
I’m not a thug,
I really want you to understand...
I'm not a thug...
I’m just me a loving, hard-working,
n' (mostly) law abiding family man.
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Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 1:47pm
re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 3:11pm
thank u my dear, yea people shouldn't but we both know they
do all the time! happy you liked this ink n appreciate ur continued support as well ;)
do all the time! happy you liked this ink n appreciate ur continued support as well ;)
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 2:23pm
Yes you are, you're a pen totin, word smokin, prose spitting, poetic thug! lol love ya bunches!
Red
Red
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re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 4:19pm
aaaawwa yea, damn you got me! but plz don't let the fuzz know! lol thank u sweetie pie :)
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 5:20pm
re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 5:32pm
Lol ur very kind my friend! thanks so much
truly appreciate ur support always :)
truly appreciate ur support always :)
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 5:41pm
No one who write like you could ever be a thug, but you do carry a bad ass pen. ;)
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re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 7:57pm
lol thank you my sweet one, becuz of you I feel special!
appreciate you always lady :)
appreciate you always lady :)
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 9:52pm
Not a thug but a MAN who knows when to be thuggish and when to fall back...it's intelligent decision making that separates the two..deeply felt ink this is my brotha...one!
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re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 11:48pm
Taking from someone who I'm sure applies the same mindset in dealing with dem folks out der... I will have to agree wholeheartedly bro.! lol yea n maybe some deserve less intellect n more head popping lol thanks kid, much peace n love to u n urs! :)
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 10:26pm
GANGSTER power in your flow; for you words commands attention,
CRIMINAL acts in your scribe; for your mind should be outlawed,
MURDER of lyrics; for your pen should bare a life sentence.
A Thug?! That depends on one's perception!
God You're Good!Xo
CRIMINAL acts in your scribe; for your mind should be outlawed,
MURDER of lyrics; for your pen should bare a life sentence.
A Thug?! That depends on one's perception!
God You're Good!Xo
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re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
27th May 2013 11:50pm
Dddaaaayyyuummnnn u got me too! I'm guilty lol
n how I do love my Rain, pouring down her sunshine
pon my window pane :) thanks bunches sweet one :)
n how I do love my Rain, pouring down her sunshine
pon my window pane :) thanks bunches sweet one :)
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
Anonymous
28th May 2013 00:06am
A delightful, 'Getting to know you better' kind of poem. Terrific ink, Poetikmind! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
28th May 2013 4:55am
Thank u Carlene, my sweetness I appreciate u much
n yea I guess next I'll all AA on ya lol
n yea I guess next I'll all AA on ya lol
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
28th May 2013 00:30am
re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
28th May 2013 4:59am
Thank u! truly happy u liked n took the time to let me know
that helps me to realize what I have to say can be a connection in another's mind, heart or soul :)
that helps me to realize what I have to say can be a connection in another's mind, heart or soul :)
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
28th May 2013 12:08pm
Good write, like you said you are not a thug, like myself if we have to go there lets go..
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re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
28th May 2013 12:44pm
Exxxxaaaccttlly!! Come on baby, lets go twist someone's cap back! lol... Thank u lady, appreciate u much :)
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28th May 2013 8:56pm
Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
2nd Mar 2015 9:25pm
I love this piece!!
and strangely I've never thought of you as a thug.. jeje
Darker.
and strangely I've never thought of you as a thug.. jeje
Darker.
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re: Re: I'm NOT a Thug...
3rd Mar 2015 00:50am
You didn't!? lol... Na I'm hardcore ole school mentality
but I'm no criminal, got some thug tendencies though lol
Thank u my friend, truly appreciate you :)
but I'm no criminal, got some thug tendencies though lol
Thank u my friend, truly appreciate you :)
Re: Re. I'm NOT a Thug...
19th Nov 2015 9:56am