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He Makes Me Glow
Clutching
on me
gripping
on him
giving me
taking him
his mouth
his tongue
my neck
to my breasts
he awakens
me
Blending
as one
maintaining
rhythm
my legs
over him
he caresses
his touch
glorious
my tenderness
swells
I glow all
around him
on me
gripping
on him
giving me
taking him
his mouth
his tongue
my neck
to my breasts
he awakens
me
Blending
as one
maintaining
rhythm
my legs
over him
he caresses
his touch
glorious
my tenderness
swells
I glow all
around him
Published 27th May 2013
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27th May 2013 00:34am
Fast bites. It lasts right. Baring complete. Each line shares heat. Turning and handling, burning like a candle, this one is hot!
27th May 2013 00:50am
Glad you liked it...thank you for reading and the wonderful
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Anonymous
27th May 2013 3:49am
lightning bug write tl
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27th May 2013 2:24pm
27th May 2013 4:46pm
Second verse makes the poem's climax and the accompanying picture illustrates it. A literally moving piece in two verses.
27th May 2013 5:32pm
27th May 2013 5:09pm
The heat in this is starts at a slow burn n grows to an inferno! Loved this :)
27th May 2013 5:33pm
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Anonymous
28th May 2013 5:44pm
Sweet, sweet sensuality
28th May 2013 5:50pm
