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Freshly Cut Grass
I'm on sabbatical
the timing was radical
I couldn't beat those who're tyrannical
maybe it was all a bit tactical
on my part anyways.....
I smoke a way the day
relaxing, stuck in haze
because here I belong
just me and my bong
things begin to make sense
hence,
I am free
flying across the galaxies
and everything I see
is wrapped in beauty
I am fulfilling my cosmic duty
so excuse me
I'll be back
maybe then everything wont be so black,
but if it still is, I'm cool with it
because I've learned how to wade through shit
even when I say I quit
know that I really don't
cause somewhere in me lives a bit of hope
the timing was radical
I couldn't beat those who're tyrannical
maybe it was all a bit tactical
on my part anyways.....
I smoke a way the day
relaxing, stuck in haze
because here I belong
just me and my bong
things begin to make sense
hence,
I am free
flying across the galaxies
and everything I see
is wrapped in beauty
I am fulfilling my cosmic duty
so excuse me
I'll be back
maybe then everything wont be so black,
but if it still is, I'm cool with it
because I've learned how to wade through shit
even when I say I quit
know that I really don't
cause somewhere in me lives a bit of hope
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
25th May 2013 8:15pm
good job
love love love the opening verse!!
When troubled times begin to bother me
I take a toke and all my cares go up in smoke ~ Cheech and Chong
love love love the opening verse!!
When troubled times begin to bother me
I take a toke and all my cares go up in smoke ~ Cheech and Chong
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
25th May 2013 9:21pm
th'burnin firn....
have much expirience therewith, but felt no need longtime now
21stCent turnedd me heartbrain connexion into an amazing source of beauty & incredible equanimity to sit thru 'the other' wit'out takin it personal.
enjoyable read, nm
have much expirience therewith, but felt no need longtime now
21stCent turnedd me heartbrain connexion into an amazing source of beauty & incredible equanimity to sit thru 'the other' wit'out takin it personal.
enjoyable read, nm
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
26th May 2013 1:40am
The fluidity of this ink was priceless!
I simply love the style of this piece, nikki! :)
Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Xo
I simply love the style of this piece, nikki! :)
Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Xo
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
26th May 2013 3:56am
Lilting rhyme, just enough to give it a rhythm. We'll be here when you get back. :)
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
26th May 2013 5:16am
Keeps on rolling stronger with each line. This one feels like it grew itself. I miss your work and look forward to reading more when you return stronger firespitter Nikki!
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
Anonymous
26th May 2013 5:56am
Knowing when to fall-back and push-on gets ya thru. The organization of this piece shows the plan's in place... hoping that last stanza doesn't take too long to come about. Whenever you're ready, Nikki! Enjoyed this ;)
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Anonymous
26th May 2013 7:36am
Flow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice! So fun to rap out loud, bitchin. Mike.
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
Anonymous
26th May 2013 9:15am
Yes, Niki, freedom is the long winding space around you on a day of joy or just when the moment hits you.....much enjoyed this write!
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
27th May 2013 2:04am
Re: Freshly Cut Grass
28th May 2013 2:54pm
Nifty title. They say a bong is a girls best friend... Cloud nine is definitely freedom
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Re: Freshly Cut Grass
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13th Jun 2013 2:23am
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