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Societal Prisoners
A poem I wrote with the self-imposed restriction of having to be exactly 20 words. Spreading Anarchy with extreme control! I know Ironic. haha! Enjoy!
[b]Societal Prisoners
Pursue possessions,
concept contrived.
Unhappy faces
left in a wake
of turbulent
disappointment.
Free yourselves from
this self imposed
prison!
[b]Societal Prisoners
Pursue possessions,
concept contrived.
Unhappy faces
left in a wake
of turbulent
disappointment.
Free yourselves from
this self imposed
prison!
Published 22nd May 2013
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Anonymous
30th May 2013 4:58am
"Societal Prisoners" in the pursuit of possessions. Yes, indeed, until one embraces minimalism. Where Less IS More.
This poem speaks volumes in clearly defined phrases. The 20-word restriction a great idea for condensing concepts. Enjoyed the read a lot. Welcome to DU, Travis. :)
Carlene
This poem speaks volumes in clearly defined phrases. The 20-word restriction a great idea for condensing concepts. Enjoyed the read a lot. Welcome to DU, Travis. :)
Carlene
9th Jun 2013 5:52am
