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Killer Smile
I smile it's a pretty smile,
no, it's
a killer smile
Can I help it if I attract
them like moths
to a flame
Don't be jealous dear
that just makes you
ugly
That right there, what
you feel right now is
envy
It will make you
bitter and
spiteful nobody
likes that in
a person
Don't worry so much
about little old me
I'll still be
interesting
So my advice to you
is smile, someone
somewhere might
think it's pretty
no, it's
a killer smile
Can I help it if I attract
them like moths
to a flame
Don't be jealous dear
that just makes you
ugly
That right there, what
you feel right now is
envy
It will make you
bitter and
spiteful nobody
likes that in
a person
Don't worry so much
about little old me
I'll still be
interesting
So my advice to you
is smile, someone
somewhere might
think it's pretty
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22nd May 2013 8:51am
I believe everyone feels a little envious at times, it is a natural emotion, how one expresses it is what makes it ugly. Keeping it inside is best (rising above it)
I suffered at the hands of jealousy much of my adult life, to the extreme at the hand's of men. It can be painful being the flame.
Nicely penned and expressed Tommie.
I suffered at the hands of jealousy much of my adult life, to the extreme at the hand's of men. It can be painful being the flame.
Nicely penned and expressed Tommie.
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Anonymous
22nd May 2013 11:41am
Smiles can melt hearts tl.
Nice write...strider
Nice write...strider
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22nd May 2013 12:15pm
You know those freeze pops kids eat?
I have a bunch of those...but they're
melted hearts....I ate two last night!
And yes, I feed them to the kids ;-)
Bahahahaaa
I have a bunch of those...but they're
melted hearts....I ate two last night!
And yes, I feed them to the kids ;-)
Bahahahaaa
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