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Universal perfect
Cradled within my hands
blowing softly
upon the glow
with utmost care, night breathed
day in one continuous stare
fronds waved from beside the lily pad
stars explode upon comet glide
and here resides
what was plane to see
skywriting and endless forest
The palmed universe
teeming with life
surely You've seen
silver streaks
they guide my hairline
pointing the finger of time
to now, where caressed
each cheek
tears forever flow
brung by the dust
as universe grows
the cradle opens
gently
stretching,
You see the center
of it, perfect place
my ever present
Blessed
.....
blowing softly
upon the glow
with utmost care, night breathed
day in one continuous stare
fronds waved from beside the lily pad
stars explode upon comet glide
and here resides
what was plane to see
skywriting and endless forest
The palmed universe
teeming with life
surely You've seen
silver streaks
they guide my hairline
pointing the finger of time
to now, where caressed
each cheek
tears forever flow
brung by the dust
as universe grows
the cradle opens
gently
stretching,
You see the center
of it, perfect place
my ever present
Blessed
.....
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Re: Universal perfect
22nd May 2013 2:17am
Like flickering fireflies on tropical nights, there is a surreal feel to this write. Good read, Soul.
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22nd May 2013 2:23am
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Anonymous
22nd May 2013 3:54am
all in the palm of our hand soul...nice write
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22nd May 2013 4:23am
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Re: Universal perfect
22nd May 2013 7:27am
Entire piece was richly perfect! Thanks for feeding it into the universe! :)
Wonderful ink Soul! xo
Wonderful ink Soul! xo
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22nd May 2013 2:14pm
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Anonymous
22nd May 2013 8:32am
this feels beautifully serene with hints of sadness throughout-to me. It's a wonderful read and very well written..great work, soula :-)
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Re: Universal perfect
23rd May 2013 12:32pm
An intergalactic poem, out of this wold.
Okay, I'm finished.
Your words are beautiful,
The palmed universe
teeming with life
surely You've seen
silver streaks
and they hold meaning in them,
behind the images they create.
Very well written :)
Okay, I'm finished.
Your words are beautiful,
The palmed universe
teeming with life
surely You've seen
silver streaks
and they hold meaning in them,
behind the images they create.
Very well written :)
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23rd May 2013 2:04pm
:) so very Kind You are Dear Scribbler, thank You for reading my humble writes!!!