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Storms Away
Day made into night
The mourning of the angered
rings loud but echos softly
The humans scatter
to places claimed safe
The animals hide
in nooks and caves
The trees soak it in
until they see the spinning eye
When the rocks beging to lift and fall
The entire world shall die
The mourning of the angered
rings loud but echos softly
The humans scatter
to places claimed safe
The animals hide
in nooks and caves
The trees soak it in
until they see the spinning eye
When the rocks beging to lift and fall
The entire world shall die
Published 20th May 2013
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22nd May 2013 9:42am
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25th May 2013 10:06am
The initial inspiration was a horrible thunderstorm in my area. It was not in OK but it did do a lot of damage. I was hoping to reference a general storm. One of nature and one of man. The storm of thunder, the storm of anger, the storm of depression, the storm of fear. All these have great consequences. Storms are dangerous.
Anonymous
24th May 2013 10:39am
Hey there and welcome to the DU :) Hope you find everything that you are looking for here.
I really enjoyed this new poem of yours. Have you heard of the band Bush? they have quite an abstract flavour to them and this poem reminded me of the style of their lyrics. Had a nice dreamy quality to your words.
Some good apocalyptic imagery in here.
Thank you for the read.
I really enjoyed this new poem of yours. Have you heard of the band Bush? they have quite an abstract flavour to them and this poem reminded me of the style of their lyrics. Had a nice dreamy quality to your words.
Some good apocalyptic imagery in here.
Thank you for the read.
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2013 12:02pm
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