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Sleepy
My mind unravels
And thoughts drift away.
Sleep threatens to overtakes me
And put an end to my day.
Things have gotten finished
But so much is left to do.
At least there is tomorrow
For accomplishing things anew.
And thoughts drift away.
Sleep threatens to overtakes me
And put an end to my day.
Things have gotten finished
But so much is left to do.
At least there is tomorrow
For accomplishing things anew.
Published 19th May 2013
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19th May 2013 5:41pm
I really like this, though I think the word "anew" at the end doesn't quite work, just because the rest of the words are more modern, and that one work just ends up sticking out a bit. Other than that one word, I think its a really nice poem
20th May 2013 00:14am
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hadn't really noticed that "anew" stood out but I now see what you mean.
