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Your Seed
give me all of your seed
in all its splendor
let me have it -- all the time
every time -- give me your cum
I want it and need it
its beautiful color and consistency
the pure essence of you
put it right here
on the tip of my tongue
licking tasting and sucking on it
from where it cums forth
feed it to me
for breakfast lunch and dinner
as the main course
your seed -- spray it
splatter it and let it spurt
all over my whole body
and deep inside of me
your seed is my everything
a true elixier of love
in all its splendor
let me have it -- all the time
every time -- give me your cum
I want it and need it
its beautiful color and consistency
the pure essence of you
put it right here
on the tip of my tongue
licking tasting and sucking on it
from where it cums forth
feed it to me
for breakfast lunch and dinner
as the main course
your seed -- spray it
splatter it and let it spurt
all over my whole body
and deep inside of me
your seed is my everything
a true elixier of love
Published 18th May 2013
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18th May 2013 2:42am
18th May 2013 9:43pm
Everything reminds us all of something......I'm reminded of a lover of mine who simply (and I know that was the right thing) wouldn't let me cum inside her. Yet I knew that until she let me....
"....spray it
splatter it and let it spurt
all over her whole body
and deep inside of her......"
I'd never feel the completeness, the oneness I needed to feel from her. My, my, my......:-p~~
Supremely executed Scarlet! You took me back to a good place : )
"....spray it
splatter it and let it spurt
all over her whole body
and deep inside of her......"
I'd never feel the completeness, the oneness I needed to feel from her. My, my, my......:-p~~
Supremely executed Scarlet! You took me back to a good place : )
18th May 2013 9:47pm
I am really glad that this took you back to a good place....
For me the poem is both a journey to the past as well as being intertwined with my present and future....
It represents a very sacred and extremely erotic space I am able to share with a lover who has captured my heart and soul since a long time ago ... :)
For me the poem is both a journey to the past as well as being intertwined with my present and future....
It represents a very sacred and extremely erotic space I am able to share with a lover who has captured my heart and soul since a long time ago ... :)
22nd May 2013 1:54pm
23rd May 2013 7:49pm
So glad you are enjoying my poetry, because you know how much I have been enjoying yours..... :)
24th May 2013 6:53pm
23rd Sep 2013 5:30am
Sorry for responding back just now, Jazzmanor.
I am glad you liked it -- now that I am reading it again it has its effect on me too, even though I wrote it, conjuring up that sense of endless craving for his seed... :)
I am glad you liked it -- now that I am reading it again it has its effect on me too, even though I wrote it, conjuring up that sense of endless craving for his seed... :)
23rd Sep 2013 6:40am
you have me smiling because I too have found a few writes in which for some reason I failed to acknowledge the comments. Sometimes I go back and read stuff I wrote and can't believe that I actually penned those words.
23rd Sep 2013 3:48am
23rd Sep 2013 5:31am
Thank you for your comment. I enjoyed the effect it had on me when I re-read it just now. :)
24th Sep 2013 4:31am
Wow... I love the greedy passion here!!
My god to be the guy who is that lucky! lol
Super hott ink lady
My god to be the guy who is that lucky! lol
Super hott ink lady
27th Sep 2013 5:01am
The weird thing is the guy who inspired this poem is the only one who made me have this incessant kind of a hot desire....
I never have or had his type of craving with anyone else.....
anyway thank u for ur lovely comment.
I never have or had his type of craving with anyone else.....
anyway thank u for ur lovely comment.
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Dec 2013 4:53am
27th Sep 2013 3:05am
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27th Sep 2013 5:05am
Thank you for relating to the poem and for reminding me to write more erotica again..... I will try to do your expectations justice...... ;)
28th Sep 2013 00:35am
Wow, someone is a lucky guy.... Him being the recipient of your inspiration and you being a willing partner with an a seemingly insatiable desire.
28th Sep 2013 4:07am
I felt like that about him ever since I first met him... :)
Thank you for your appreciative comment.
Thank you for your appreciative comment.
19th Dec 2013 6:21am
Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 7:38pm
These words are dripping! To be wanted that intensely is any person's dream, this poem had an effect on me!
16th Jan 2014 6:37am
16th Jan 2014 6:51pm
16th Jan 2014 6:57pm
....deep inside of me
your seed is my everything
a true elixier of love
there alone it will seed
produce apple trees
get married and sex legally
all else cums is
a drink sweet
temporary
a series of maybe variety
your seed is my everything
a true elixier of love
there alone it will seed
produce apple trees
get married and sex legally
all else cums is
a drink sweet
temporary
a series of maybe variety
16th Jan 2014 8:29pm
Get married, have sex legally and produce
beautiful apple trees.... somehow u and I
understand the world very similarly -- agreed.. :)!
beautiful apple trees.... somehow u and I
understand the world very similarly -- agreed.. :)!
16th Jan 2014 9:26pm
thanks for that
Velvet...
couplet...
of agreement
of the final out come
of cum
as it seeds deep
Velvet...
couplet...
of agreement
of the final out come
of cum
as it seeds deep
19th Jan 2014 6:49am
Anonymous
16th Jan 2014 9:37pm
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19th Jan 2014 6:52am
Especially if she is with a man who is equally as wanting....... together they will create spray after spray of beautiful thoughts...... ;)
