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The Dress
I saw you and stood transfixed
gazing mouth open
a gasp escaping from my mouth
your color the most
tantalizing and vibrant
ruby red my eyes had ever
been blessed to see
luxurious satin, sleeveless
showing a very dangerous
low vee neckline that
plunged deeply in the back
almost making me blush
as it sweeps down
clinging close to the body
showing off all a girls assets
but leaving enough to imagination
showing off legs that
will go perfect with
a three inch heel
yes, this is it
the perfect dress
and you’re all mine
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Re: The Dress
17th May 2013 1:43am
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17th May 2013 5:21am
Please tell me u gonna work her Over!? lol
another mentally stimulating ink!
another mentally stimulating ink!
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17th May 2013 11:33am
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17th May 2013 8:07am
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Re: The Dress
17th May 2013 1:09pm
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Anonymous
17th May 2013 3:03pm
lunaz69,
Cheers to leaving some to the imagination ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
Cheers to leaving some to the imagination ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
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Re: The Dress
Anonymous
17th May 2013 9:43pm
I love the perspective of this piece. Luna and her ruby silk love affair. Don't get too excited when your in its embrace. You'll have other ladies saying I'll have what she's wearing ;)
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Anonymous
17th May 2013 11:28pm
You'll be dressed for any kind of success you desire
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