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As The day Ends
as darkness encroached
noise diminished
as slowly as the sun
slid downward
like an eyelid closing
on the day
calming the sky
calling for the stars
to keep watch
till tomorrows
new light
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Re: As The day Ends
16th May 2013 00:40am
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Re: As The day Ends
16th May 2013 6:34am
A sanguine poem, it gives the impression
'everything's alright for a little while'
one that we wont get on the dark side of
DU's opinion on 'night'. I liked the change
in outlook, like a fresh intake of air.
Very well written, as usual :)
'everything's alright for a little while'
one that we wont get on the dark side of
DU's opinion on 'night'. I liked the change
in outlook, like a fresh intake of air.
Very well written, as usual :)
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Anonymous
16th May 2013 9:56am
Sweet and uplifting
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16th May 2013 1:50pm