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Wondering?
They tell me that love should never be contingent....
But I wonder if yours is?
They tell me that love should be everlasting and true....
I wonder if despite the past, you can be?
They tell me that love and fear can't co-exist...
Then I wonder how to define these emotions that somehow are a mix..
They tell me that love can withstand and remain...
Makes me wonder when I started to doubt this?
Makes me question my own contingencies, fortitude, and truthfullness in my own love....
It makes me wonder....
But I wonder if yours is?
They tell me that love should be everlasting and true....
I wonder if despite the past, you can be?
They tell me that love and fear can't co-exist...
Then I wonder how to define these emotions that somehow are a mix..
They tell me that love can withstand and remain...
Makes me wonder when I started to doubt this?
Makes me question my own contingencies, fortitude, and truthfullness in my own love....
It makes me wonder....
Published 14th May 2013
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15th May 2013 3:50pm
Love is the greatest enigma - my fav: "They tell me that love and fear can't co-exist...
Then I wonder how to define these emotions that somehow are a mix" Because we love, we fear.
I really enjoyed this one most of all because the topic makes me want to discuss it.
Then I wonder how to define these emotions that somehow are a mix" Because we love, we fear.
I really enjoyed this one most of all because the topic makes me want to discuss it.
15th May 2013 6:46pm
Let's discuss then lady!!! :) The mix emotions--to me it's like a wolf in sheep's clothing. Under it, under the guises, under the "circumstances, it's the ugly fear creating a "mix"...no judgement at all because I feel like many times I stay in a MIX, SWIRL, MISH MASH mess lol!
Girl do I feel ya! For me its like a roller coaster ride... standing in line for my turn;true love takes time.
getting in and buckling up; they say its for safety but its really to keep your ass from jumping off! Even a love created by God will have some rough patches because He didnt create men to be perfect...just us. ;)
At some point it becomes too scary with its highs dropping down to the lows; makes ya wanna just get off and run for your life! But without the ride you can't appreciate the greatness in your lover and the endurance in yourself. Thus the co-exsitence of love and fear.
Giiiiirl you done got me started!!!!
getting in and buckling up; they say its for safety but its really to keep your ass from jumping off! Even a love created by God will have some rough patches because He didnt create men to be perfect...just us. ;)
At some point it becomes too scary with its highs dropping down to the lows; makes ya wanna just get off and run for your life! But without the ride you can't appreciate the greatness in your lover and the endurance in yourself. Thus the co-exsitence of love and fear.
Giiiiirl you done got me started!!!!
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17th Sep 2013 00:55am
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17th Sep 2013 8:38pm
Much appreciated! friendship from the onset is always more cementing!! thanks for the read!
17th Aug 2014 11:00am
