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Just a Walk
Alone I walk
shawled in thoughts
Treading light and soft
on moss green paths
Old rocks and pebbles
Paved the moist soggy
ground of green grass
smooth as a shaggy carpet
Sounds of twittering birds
Serenades the balmy air
Hopping squirrels on branches
rustles the canopies of green
On the jungle floor
Tranquillity reigns
Except for rustles of dwellers
In the green Kingdom
Hearts call and fragrance
of rose petals comes from afar
of bread baking and candles
flickering on windows
Return, whispers the heart
To a beloved hearth
But always out there
Eden calls to take me home
shawled in thoughts
Treading light and soft
on moss green paths
Old rocks and pebbles
Paved the moist soggy
ground of green grass
smooth as a shaggy carpet
Sounds of twittering birds
Serenades the balmy air
Hopping squirrels on branches
rustles the canopies of green
On the jungle floor
Tranquillity reigns
Except for rustles of dwellers
In the green Kingdom
Hearts call and fragrance
of rose petals comes from afar
of bread baking and candles
flickering on windows
Return, whispers the heart
To a beloved hearth
But always out there
Eden calls to take me home
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Re: Just a Walk
13th May 2013 12:14pm
Beautiful picture painted here. I should like to go there someday. But I do not know where it is. The tranquility and the rose petals and the green jungle and the squirrels and the birds . . . the peace here is palpable. It beckons at my heart too.
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re: Re: Just a Walk
13th May 2013 12:26pm
Tranquility and serenity comes from within you. It adds beauty to your walk with nature.Someday, your heart will lead you there too. Thanks Demo for reading and commenting.
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Anonymous
13th May 2013 12:24pm
simply beautiful grace
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Anonymous
13th May 2013 12:41pm
You paint with words and the resulting picture is lush and rich....a good read

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re: Re: Just a Walk
Nature is just so beautiful isnt it. Words are inadequate to describe its wonders...you are so kind, Kitty.
Re: Just a Walk
13th May 2013 3:38pm
Now this has your signature all over it, A classic and classy Grace piece.
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Re: Just a Walk
13th May 2013 6:10pm
Beautiful write of the communing.
It's when we walk within this space (of tranquillity in our hearts) that we learn the greatest lessons and find the greatest peace.
much love
G
It's when we walk within this space (of tranquillity in our hearts) that we learn the greatest lessons and find the greatest peace.
much love
G
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re: Re: Just a Walk
13th May 2013 8:16pm
Yes dear Glynis, the threshold of Eden is chaos without peace and tranquility in our hearts.
Re: Just a Walk
14th May 2013 00:04am
I like the way you use words to paint a flawless picture—this was an awesome poem!
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14th May 2013 00:44am
Re: Just a Walk
8th Apr 2015 10:10pm
This reminds me of the long walks I used to take back home, Before I made the city my abode. The imagery is perfect. This made my day.
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9th Apr 2015 9:43am