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Re: Angish
Anonymous
12th May 2013 00:11am
The last stanza says it all red...very nice write
strider...
strider...
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re: Re: Angish
12th May 2013 00:15am
Re: Angish
12th May 2013 00:23am
You raise your head the same way you always do my dear, get past the hurt and make room for the new, the wonderful and the better. Because that is how it works. Something more beautiful comes along and you end up being thankful that the one who left you, left you. :)
Wow I rambled.
Great emotional write Sis. :)
Wow I rambled.
Great emotional write Sis. :)
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re: Re: Angish
12th May 2013 1:15am
No, you did not ramble,you spoke passionately from the heart proving why I hold you in such high regard.Thank you Magda.
Red
Red
Re: Angish
12th May 2013 00:50am
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12th May 2013 1:16am
Re: Angish
Anonymous
12th May 2013 4:25am
Gypsy...
Your talent never ends
You keep improving with each poem
Kitty
Your talent never ends
You keep improving with each poem
Kitty
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re: Re: Angish
12th May 2013 3:19pm
Re: Angish
12th May 2013 5:41am
Such sadness Dear Red, Lovely writing Horrid subject, hope The days have better sun!!!
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re: Re: Angish
12th May 2013 3:20pm
Yeah I wrote what I felt and it was very sad, thanks Soul, I hope so too.
Red
Red
re: re: Re: Angish
13th May 2013 00:47am
Such a heavy sleeve Dear Red :(
Your emotion shows in every Ink-I love that!!!
Your emotion shows in every Ink-I love that!!!
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13th May 2013 1:17am
Yes I would have to agree,no half measures for me, no sir its all or nothing.And right now I hurt like hell! Thanks soul.
Red
Red
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13th May 2013 1:56am
Awww Dearie, my Heart To You Kind soul, You chin up and smile soon for me!!!
I'm cheering for Ya!!!
I'm cheering for Ya!!!
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13th May 2013 2:06am
Re: Angish
12th May 2013 4:12pm
Heartfelt sadness...someone has grievously wounded you and that is shameful. Reminds me of the country classic “She took my heart and stomped that sucker flat”.
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re: Re: Angish
12th May 2013 5:06pm
Indeed! It got the poop stomped out of it, Thanks for reading and commenting this piece.
Red
Red
Re: Angish
13th May 2013 3:59pm
Powerful, n uneasy ink to read I know this pain too well...
My heart bleeds for u lady :( still I must say h expressed it exceptionally :)
My heart bleeds for u lady :( still I must say h expressed it exceptionally :)
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re: Re: Angish
13th May 2013 4:03pm
As does my heart but... well there you have it, shit happens, make me just wanna give up and say F*ck it.lol Thanks for stopping by to read.
Red
Red
Re: Angish
16th May 2013 8:38pm
Incredible inking my dear...You can feel the anguish, the confusion, the despair, the longing, & the surrender...Simply amazing write ;-)
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re: Re: Angish
16th May 2013 8:54pm
This one was born of some powerful emotions and memories that are not the most pleasant, they needed release.Thanks D
Red
Red
Re: Angish
13th Aug 2013 3:54pm
"After winter comes the summer. After night comes the dawn. And after every storm, there comes clear, open skies"
Head up my sweetness. Lets roll!!!!
Head up my sweetness. Lets roll!!!!
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re: Re: Angish
13th Aug 2013 4:03pm
Doc. I am tiered of getting beat up, this year started off rough, still trying to pick up the pieces. Thanks sweets!
Red
Red