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Ecstasy (Carpe_Noctem -Crimsin Collab.)
This little white dove
sits on my palm,
ready to give my
serotonin receptors a blast
this warm feeling
passes my spine
feel the empathy
feel the music
pulsating rhythms rift
through my body
as the light show begins
seeing falling stars
streak their way past my vision
feeling so very beautiful
like i'm a goddess
the center of the universe
ahhh between my thighs
I feel you though you haven't touched me
double drop triple drop
my serotonin receptors plead
stop, but once you pop
you really can't stop
a ten pack weekend
just to feel
the warm empathy
brain I hope you can cope
awashed on the shores of lust
I couldn't stop even if I wanted to
you set me ablaze
your Aphrodite to you my Poseidon
you are poison to my soul
yet I desire your venom
slither into my garden
like the snake did Eve
open my eyes to your wisdom
oh magic elixir
let me see my God standing before me
salve my eyes, give me release
years pilled off my head
just a self medicated mess
I hate this now
yet...
I am hooked like a fish
Coke, meth , K
what next...
sits on my palm,
ready to give my
serotonin receptors a blast
this warm feeling
passes my spine
feel the empathy
feel the music
pulsating rhythms rift
through my body
as the light show begins
seeing falling stars
streak their way past my vision
feeling so very beautiful
like i'm a goddess
the center of the universe
ahhh between my thighs
I feel you though you haven't touched me
double drop triple drop
my serotonin receptors plead
stop, but once you pop
you really can't stop
a ten pack weekend
just to feel
the warm empathy
brain I hope you can cope
awashed on the shores of lust
I couldn't stop even if I wanted to
you set me ablaze
your Aphrodite to you my Poseidon
you are poison to my soul
yet I desire your venom
slither into my garden
like the snake did Eve
open my eyes to your wisdom
oh magic elixir
let me see my God standing before me
salve my eyes, give me release
years pilled off my head
just a self medicated mess
I hate this now
yet...
I am hooked like a fish
Coke, meth , K
what next...
Published 6th May 2013
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Anonymous
6th May 2013 10:47pm
awesome work you guys..beautiful and hauntingly real-a very effective style for the subject matter--write on people! much love :-)
7th May 2013 6:47am
Anonymous
6th May 2013 10:57pm
great collab you two! like the snake did eve....
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strider
7th May 2013 6:47am
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7th May 2013 7:28am
beautiful soul you were the heart of this poem..I humbly thank you..much love Crim :)
7th May 2013 8:29pm
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