Eve's Rotten Apple

what is spoken in the dark
will reveal it's self in the light
or so I've been told

here I knitted this
cloak, laced with
the good from me
now take my hand

your soul is not rotten
merely bruised
here take my hand
dancing with our demons
on this night
reborn in the new light

Bob said it best
my friend
The Times They Are a Changing

thank you for weaving me a cloak and giving balm to my sore soul.. I loved what you wrote Micheal.. it is beautiful.. much love Crim

Another Great Pen O Crim:)
I So Love 3 lines...Stark Dark, Wonderfully!!!

thank you lovely Soul.. peace Crim

We may think that we approach the light, but the light knows better, and we may think that the light is judgment, but the light of the light itself does not condemn, or else it would not be unconditioned.

thank you dear Turtle for the insightful comment..peace Crim

You have a wonderfully raw mind/writing ability,
your words always take me somewhere else.

Somewhere dark, revealing, insightful.

Thank you, Crim.

thank you beautiful Scribbler..peace Crim

Well done crim...strider

thank you Strider :)

Those rotten apples distort our view, as our senses slowly meander down the dark alley. As we begin to wake from the haze we see the healing begin as we bare our soul. Honored to know such a tender one under the scars of hurt.

Such depth and revelation you steadily share through your words... always touching my core.

thank you dear Ken for such a heartfelt comment..peace Crim

the light is always revealing in the end, it's living til then that takes the strength of..well, I am still trying to figure it out..lol
another great write from your beautiful soul, Crim..always an emotional journey reading you :-) peace x

thank you Miki I agree we have many twists and turns on our journey into the light..i'm glad I have such a sister who understands..peace Crim :)

That was very, enlightening, and written with such ease. Thank You.

thank you peace Crim :)