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On the Edge
On this ledge,
barely
on this edge
Our love
a hedge
against
our free fall
mayhem
revelries.
If we should fall
and hear that call
that hearts
are bound to
lease
unleashed
against the conic
time filled life,
then let our
crash
feel no great dash
in that who
we were together
was a slow sub talk
lapsed and cantilevered
above
the city lights
in that country
of our dreams.
runningturtle87
barely
on this edge
Our love
a hedge
against
our free fall
mayhem
revelries.
If we should fall
and hear that call
that hearts
are bound to
lease
unleashed
against the conic
time filled life,
then let our
crash
feel no great dash
in that who
we were together
was a slow sub talk
lapsed and cantilevered
above
the city lights
in that country
of our dreams.
runningturtle87
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4th May 2013 8:50pm
I could cite so many songs that this brought to mind but I instead will state what you probably already know. Great read with wide appeal and perfect illustration to go with the words.
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5th May 2013 1:29pm
Thanks, JM...as you have pointed out, I'm standing on shoulders here..can't keep those tunes out...
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Very nice...
6th May 2013 00:47am
Strong...lyrical...
Great image too...
WORD.
https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/dirty-dozen-13-passion-poems/id443997313
Great image too...
WORD.
https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/dirty-dozen-13-passion-poems/id443997313
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re: Very nice...
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