Leaf Haiku

soul touching kind of work. I feel almost crying about this. I am trying to compose the sequel...

Dry leaf
not crushed by
- grief takes a gentle fly.

aw that's a lovely sequel! thanks for sharing

i like the flow of this it's deep and just has a good feel to it

thank you for adding it to your reading list :)

I love the brevity of haiku and you mastered it.thanx for sharing

   
i'm a sucker for leaves, but even if i wasn't
i'd think this was excellent.  

you paint - for me - a picture that fills me with emotion.

Lovely

S

steven i can't find the words to thank you enough:) such a comment is heaven sent

i like this its good

a leaf  
lonesome
overlooked  by some