Adventures of a Sexual Nature

cooch, on the other hand... well hell, why not use both hands?

but seriously, your unseriousness actually means something; more than
most of the 'dark poetry raft-o-shit' crap that pretty much browns out
the eyes of DU. (yeah, i know, damn, i being serious...)

Spanks, Ray. I see where you're going with that. I'm very rarely serious and when I am it feels a lot like cramps. :)

terribly dark to dig out the feelings and highly erotic. You have created a huge magic field in just two lines.

Thanks, Anando. It's just a tid bit of comedy, I'm glad you liked the eroticism shoved up all in there, lol. :D

You write with reckless abandon and that is a style in itself.

The poem comes with an erotic stench.

Thank you, Divine! I love that, 'erotic stench', very beautiful little phrase there. :) Thanks again.

short and to the point much like the action in itself.i was so eager to read it i got it all naked and unwrapped and once inside infected before even reading a single word came and left. with a waft of my hand i can still catch its scent rising of my detumescent tool.

Wow, that was beautiful Swords. I'm honored to have your detumescent tool on my poems comments. :) Thanks so much, that was a lovely poem all in itself. :D