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My Secret Crush
You….
Show me grace
Show me your desire
Show me your passion
Show me the burning spirit
Through creative words
Sculpt me towers of beauty
With the power of your pen
You….
Lead my heart
To graceful havens
To the dawn of Eden
For your words are searing
Like Swords of fire
Ecstasy rules yet cruelly cuts
Yet they are truth in such words
You….
Show me how you love
Your strength, your dignity
your touch your embrace
through the sparkle
of words in your poems
I wish your eyes see me
And know....
Now I sit here
with a mug of steaming tea
I look at you within
the screen of the computer
in admiration...
another good poem
churned out last night
Show me grace
Show me your desire
Show me your passion
Show me the burning spirit
Through creative words
Sculpt me towers of beauty
With the power of your pen
You….
Lead my heart
To graceful havens
To the dawn of Eden
For your words are searing
Like Swords of fire
Ecstasy rules yet cruelly cuts
Yet they are truth in such words
You….
Show me how you love
Your strength, your dignity
your touch your embrace
through the sparkle
of words in your poems
I wish your eyes see me
And know....
Now I sit here
with a mug of steaming tea
I look at you within
the screen of the computer
in admiration...
another good poem
churned out last night
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2nd May 2013 3:11am
Re: My Secret Crush
2nd May 2013 3:33am
A wonderful write Dear Grace!!!
So You'll have Duels for Your favor going on's about Your castle too eh??? Hmmmm many Wonders of this...I will be buggin' You for details!!!
So You'll have Duels for Your favor going on's about Your castle too eh??? Hmmmm many Wonders of this...I will be buggin' You for details!!!
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I dont think anybody is remotely interested, Soul, but as they say, hope springs eternal. LOL!! Thanks for reading and commenting, though.
Re: My Secret Crush
2nd May 2013 7:11am
I can relate very much......
Thank you -- a wonderful write about pining for that secret poetic crush... :)
Thank you -- a wonderful write about pining for that secret poetic crush... :)
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2nd May 2013 12:30pm
Oh yes, one does pine at times, and thats when inspiration flows, thank you Scarlet.
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2nd May 2013 11:27am
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2nd May 2013 12:29pm
Re: My Secret Crush
2nd May 2013 11:32am
Beautifully crafted poem illustrating the positive word-craft of others, who can for moments sake take us on an uplifting journey away from the complexity of our lives.
Really enjoyed!
Really enjoyed!
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2nd May 2013 12:28pm
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Anonymous
2nd May 2013 12:16pm
Lovely write grace...good luck!
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2nd May 2013 3:43pm
Looks like you were on Skype with your crush, Grace...and guess what? I have a good mental vibe on who he is! Good luck to both of you...
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2nd May 2013 3:50pm