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funny ol day
we all gotta story
I gotta story
you gotta story
that bitch sitting over their
abusing the checkout girl
head so far up her arse
corse her worlds gunna be shit.!
but even that bitch gotta story
most would look at that woman
and think "whatta bitch"
fuck I'm even referring to her as one
but where's her head at.?
for all we know she could of just
witnessed the love of her life
skull fucking her dead mother.?
now that shit would make buying
a pack of smokes an a drink
hard fucking work for most of us.!
I gave that bitch a smile
and funnily enough
as her cheek quivered
and our eyes met
I got a glimpse of her story
she was in pain
but could see my understanding
I might have even spotted a little sparkle,
as I kept walking I was
reminded of a quote I once herd
"if you judge a fish on its ability to
climb a tree, it will live its whole life thinking its stupid"
not directly relative I guess
but if we took the time to understand people for who they are instead of who we are, maybe we could make someone feel a little ounce of worth, and I know for a fact, when you are dry humping those rocks at the bottom, laughing at them and telling them to get fucked.!
one little bit of kindness shown to you can stop a whole lotta damage to ya nuts.!
I gotta story
you gotta story
that bitch sitting over their
abusing the checkout girl
head so far up her arse
corse her worlds gunna be shit.!
but even that bitch gotta story
most would look at that woman
and think "whatta bitch"
fuck I'm even referring to her as one
but where's her head at.?
for all we know she could of just
witnessed the love of her life
skull fucking her dead mother.?
now that shit would make buying
a pack of smokes an a drink
hard fucking work for most of us.!
I gave that bitch a smile
and funnily enough
as her cheek quivered
and our eyes met
I got a glimpse of her story
she was in pain
but could see my understanding
I might have even spotted a little sparkle,
as I kept walking I was
reminded of a quote I once herd
"if you judge a fish on its ability to
climb a tree, it will live its whole life thinking its stupid"
not directly relative I guess
but if we took the time to understand people for who they are instead of who we are, maybe we could make someone feel a little ounce of worth, and I know for a fact, when you are dry humping those rocks at the bottom, laughing at them and telling them to get fucked.!
one little bit of kindness shown to you can stop a whole lotta damage to ya nuts.!
Published 1st May 2013
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Anonymous
1st May 2013 4:23pm
Baaaahhhhahahaha......truthful and friggin funny....
That's sooo true....oh well....we can only try to turn our arrogant ways....faaaarkinnnn awesome:) yayyyy...
" note friendly feedback " lol....
In my list my friend:)
That's sooo true....oh well....we can only try to turn our arrogant ways....faaaarkinnnn awesome:) yayyyy...
" note friendly feedback " lol....
In my list my friend:)
1st May 2013 9:45pm
in ya list, I'm humbled.!
and yea "friendly feedback" I simply put that there now to try slow down the cynical bulshit views of closed minded fucks that think I really care for there opinion on my grammar or structure lol I'm not here to become no fucking Edgar or baffle people with words no cunt understands haha if people don't like how I am I care not to know they can just take a seat on their intellectual dildo an bounce :)
and yea "friendly feedback" I simply put that there now to try slow down the cynical bulshit views of closed minded fucks that think I really care for there opinion on my grammar or structure lol I'm not here to become no fucking Edgar or baffle people with words no cunt understands haha if people don't like how I am I care not to know they can just take a seat on their intellectual dildo an bounce :)
2nd May 2013 5:36pm
*giggles at the wit in your pen*
Funny, yet I loved the message.
"not directly relative I guess
but if we took the time to understand people for who they are instead of who we are, maybe we could make someone feel a little ounce of worth, and I know for a fact, when you are dry humping those rocks at the bottom, laughing at them and telling them to get fucked.!
one little bit of kindness shown to you can stop a whole lotta damage to ya nuts.!"<--should be a quote to spread like a virus. Loved it!
....and they can just take a seat on their intellectual dildo an bounce'<--HA....so loving your ink thus far...
Funny, yet I loved the message.
"not directly relative I guess
but if we took the time to understand people for who they are instead of who we are, maybe we could make someone feel a little ounce of worth, and I know for a fact, when you are dry humping those rocks at the bottom, laughing at them and telling them to get fucked.!
one little bit of kindness shown to you can stop a whole lotta damage to ya nuts.!"<--should be a quote to spread like a virus. Loved it!
....and they can just take a seat on their intellectual dildo an bounce'<--HA....so loving your ink thus far...
2nd May 2013 9:56pm
