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So Deep
I am your ocean....swim in me
Feel my wet sea....surround you
Dive deep....
....crash into the bottom
Come to my surface....watch as I capsize
Take in my waves....taste the foam we created
Stroke deeper....
....ride my tidal wave
Feel my wet sea....surround you
Dive deep....
....crash into the bottom
Come to my surface....watch as I capsize
Take in my waves....taste the foam we created
Stroke deeper....
....ride my tidal wave
Published 30th Apr 2013
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30th Apr 2013 10:21pm
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1st May 2013 00:11am
30th Apr 2013 11:36pm
NIce write girl!
I have read some of your other erotic works
YOu got some steamy talent !
Fire
I have read some of your other erotic works
YOu got some steamy talent !
Fire
1st May 2013 00:13am
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Anonymous
1st May 2013 2:16am
oceanic imagery tl
strider
strider
1st May 2013 2:44am
1st May 2013 7:50am
Love it never was keen on the sea
you have just changed my mind;)
Beautiful descriptions and images.
you have just changed my mind;)
Beautiful descriptions and images.
1st May 2013 10:49am
