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Night Town
Moon shines on the street,
Lighting the way through the night.
The cars are silent,
The shadows glaring,
No noise;
It's deafening.
And all alone
These streets are choking,
Suffocating.
My shadow stands taller than me,
While I cower in the moonlight.
This small town.
Seems strangly bigger.
Lighting the way through the night.
The cars are silent,
The shadows glaring,
No noise;
It's deafening.
And all alone
These streets are choking,
Suffocating.
My shadow stands taller than me,
While I cower in the moonlight.
This small town.
Seems strangly bigger.
Published 14th Oct 2010
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4th Nov 2010 2:03pm
I can see loneliness and desperation. Don't know if that was what you were going for, but that's what I see. Very nice!
14th Nov 2010 3:29am
