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my writers block
mental block
something disturbed
trapped in my head
can't get it out
must think i'm mad
must think i've lost it
something bizarre
something strange
something or nothing
i can't explain
i feel like i'm blocked
like i can't write a thing
i could never be as good as you
something disturbed
trapped in my head
can't get it out
must think i'm mad
must think i've lost it
something bizarre
something strange
something or nothing
i can't explain
i feel like i'm blocked
like i can't write a thing
i could never be as good as you
Published 12th Oct 2010
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12th Oct 2010 3:06pm
awwww poor launa get a mental block :P
i get this often.
a great poem; even though you had a mental block you still managed to throw in how you're feeling :)
some good emotion in here and a strange twist of envy on the end
nice one :) x
i get this often.
a great poem; even though you had a mental block you still managed to throw in how you're feeling :)
some good emotion in here and a strange twist of envy on the end
nice one :) x
12th Oct 2010 3:07pm
thanks sarah :D
and i didn't realy notice that i actually created a poem with a mental block lol
thank you for reading friend xxx
and i didn't realy notice that i actually created a poem with a mental block lol
thank you for reading friend xxx
12th Oct 2010 3:08pm
30th Nov 2010 8:57am
This is amazing!! I especially love the last sentence, thank you for writing it :) xx
30th Nov 2010 5:36pm
thank you, i wrote this when i had a writers block so i wasn't expecting it to turn out well lol :)
