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I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
I hear the sound of inevitability;
It is a cruel and cold sound,
From afar, deep and profound,
Carrying with it ineluctability—
Where down prostrate I lie,
Turning and turning on sores untold,
A sight too torturous to truly behold;
I wait retired to ascend the sky.
Shadows stupendous shift and swoop;
Shapes of vast sizes and stern intentions;
Phantoms of evil haunting my deliberations;
Harbingers hovering where I droop—
From a long life of troubles and trials:
A life of learning through mistakes and regrets,
Of eternal endurance, uncertainty, and fatal frets;
Of diseases, hatred, hungers, and burials!
I hear the sound of inevitability;
It is the song of my doom;
It is the call of my tomb;
It is the approach of faithful certainty.
It is a cruel and cold sound,
From afar, deep and profound,
Carrying with it ineluctability—
Where down prostrate I lie,
Turning and turning on sores untold,
A sight too torturous to truly behold;
I wait retired to ascend the sky.
Shadows stupendous shift and swoop;
Shapes of vast sizes and stern intentions;
Phantoms of evil haunting my deliberations;
Harbingers hovering where I droop—
From a long life of troubles and trials:
A life of learning through mistakes and regrets,
Of eternal endurance, uncertainty, and fatal frets;
Of diseases, hatred, hungers, and burials!
I hear the sound of inevitability;
It is the song of my doom;
It is the call of my tomb;
It is the approach of faithful certainty.
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Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
26th Apr 2013 10:53pm
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26th Apr 2013 11:24pm
Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
27th Apr 2013 1:19am
Death respects no man and comes for us all, yet it is how live that dictates how we die, nice piece my friend.
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re: Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
27th Apr 2013 1:17pm
Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
27th Apr 2013 9:50am
The fear of death follows from the fear of life.
A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. I love me some Mark Twain!
This ink is absolutely Profound! I love your PEN! :)
A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. I love me some Mark Twain!
This ink is absolutely Profound! I love your PEN! :)
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re: Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
27th Apr 2013 1:19pm
Thank you so much, Rain. We share the love for Mark Twain. A great man he was, indeed!
Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
27th Apr 2013 2:42pm
re: Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
27th Apr 2013 2:55pm
There is no other way to go, my dear, Grace. Life is a one-way travel; and the destination cannot be altered.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
28th Apr 2013 1:35am
There is certain feeling that I describe as neither negative or positive that only comes in that moment you are totally aware that something is going to happen and there is nothing you can do to avoid it.
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re: Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
28th Apr 2013 11:50am
Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
29th Apr 2013 4:01am
Wonderful pen Demo!!!
I don't wait for it, I live, running till it catches up to me:)
You breathe life with Your ink Demo!!!
I don't wait for it, I live, running till it catches up to me:)
You breathe life with Your ink Demo!!!
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re: Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
29th Apr 2013 9:53am
Re: I Hear the Sound of Inevitability
26th Jan 2014 5:27pm
awesome and epic
it encourages the dark writer to read others tales of what occurs when they close their eyes
enjoyed the read, my friend
look forward to more
it encourages the dark writer to read others tales of what occurs when they close their eyes
enjoyed the read, my friend
look forward to more
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