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Invisible
I run right by
No one notice
I scream and yell
No one notice
I rob a bank
No one notice
What do I have to do,
Just to get noticed.
No one notice
I scream and yell
No one notice
I rob a bank
No one notice
What do I have to do,
Just to get noticed.
Published 25th Apr 2013
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8th May 2013 4:15am
this one is funny, i really like it! it'd be notices though, up till the end. something about short blasts! like emily dickenson! always make a good punch at the end when they are that small! i noticed ya, ok? hehehe looks like i'm alone at thinking this is the most brilliant one. maybe i have strange tastes!
8th May 2013 5:43am
It's only been read 18 times sadly :( but apparently it's just something that doesn't catch anyone's attention. I love Emily Dickinson she was my insperation when I first started writing.
9th Jul 2013 00:07am
Keep posting such astonishing literature and surely you will be noticed. Can't wait for more.
