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Me and you
You are dark and cold like the night.
No stars in your sky.
I am hot and warm like the day on a seaside.
And full with stars in my nights.
You are a slave of your faith,
I am a slave of my love.
We are the day and the night.
I feel your fear,
You feel my vitality.
You dream about freedom,
I dream about immortality.
Me and you – so close and so far away from each other.
Me and you – so equal and so different in our reality.
I am you and you are me – always separated and always together.
No stars in your sky.
I am hot and warm like the day on a seaside.
And full with stars in my nights.
You are a slave of your faith,
I am a slave of my love.
We are the day and the night.
I feel your fear,
You feel my vitality.
You dream about freedom,
I dream about immortality.
Me and you – so close and so far away from each other.
Me and you – so equal and so different in our reality.
I am you and you are me – always separated and always together.
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Re: Me and you
18th Apr 2013 3:13am
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18th Apr 2013 4:28am
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Re: Me and you
18th Apr 2013 10:50am
Wow! Wow! Wow! Great new riff on how opposites attract - and need each other
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18th Apr 2013 10:58am
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Re: Me and you
19th Apr 2013 10:56pm
Love the opposites - could feel the warmth in contrast, if you are cold you would want to embrace it.
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Re: Me and you
20th Apr 2013 6:39am
i am tired at times loving a mirror image.. wish i could make love to a woman who is my siamese twin
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Re: Me and you
5th Aug 2014 4:22am
Clicked at the DU Random Poem and was led to an echo... Thank you for this. :)
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Re. Me and you
10th Feb 2020 1:47am
I got to read this beautiful poem from one of the writer's reading list. Excellent job.
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