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Life on fire
I am living on fire,
I am burning inside.
I am full with desire
And dreaming all night!
I am living on fire,
My cells even are burning,
My blood is boiling with anger,
I am whole in a big danger.
I am living on fire,
I am burning inside.
I am full with desire,
I can get him out of my mind.
I am living on fire,
I am burning inside.
I am full with desire,
My passion is the only my fire,
My passion is killing me fast!
I am burning inside.
I am full with desire
And dreaming all night!
I am living on fire,
My cells even are burning,
My blood is boiling with anger,
I am whole in a big danger.
I am living on fire,
I am burning inside.
I am full with desire,
I can get him out of my mind.
I am living on fire,
I am burning inside.
I am full with desire,
My passion is the only my fire,
My passion is killing me fast!
Published 16th Apr 2013
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17th Apr 2013 00:13am
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17th Apr 2013 00:33am
17th Apr 2013 1:14pm
This has so much passion, no need for anger though n definitely, don't let the passion kill you! I mean how will we ever get any more passion filled writes if you did? lol
Very well done sweetie! :)
Very well done sweetie! :)
18th Apr 2013 2:46am
Thanks! Do not worry, when I burn out, we ll make a phoenix from the ash and with our imagination will put heart and passion in it again, so I the most important thing is, that the passion ll never die :))))
19th Apr 2013 11:01pm
Might read better if it was split into verses beginning "I am living on fire", rather than one big hot dollop.
19th Apr 2013 11:56pm
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