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This Is My Girl
She was a
striking brunette
with olive skin
cat like eyes
of blue
My girl, my love
Her features
remind me
of Cleopatra
and
Audrey Hepburn
she was
gorgeous
My love, my girl
When she smiles
she wears
it across
her entire
face
My girl, my love
Like an iris
shes curvy
and
beautiful
Looking like
a goddess
in her
own way
My love, my girl
striking brunette
with olive skin
cat like eyes
of blue
My girl, my love
Her features
remind me
of Cleopatra
and
Audrey Hepburn
she was
gorgeous
My love, my girl
When she smiles
she wears
it across
her entire
face
My girl, my love
Like an iris
shes curvy
and
beautiful
Looking like
a goddess
in her
own way
My love, my girl
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Re: This Is My Girl
17th Apr 2013 3:03pm
It sounds like my girl too! lol
this is nice n your description n thoughts on this 'girl'
implies a deep connection :)
this is nice n your description n thoughts on this 'girl'
implies a deep connection :)
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17th Apr 2013 3:31pm
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17th Apr 2013 10:20pm
Loved your poem My Girl...very cute..you should read the one I wrote called Vroom ;)
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17th Apr 2013 9:56pm
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17th Apr 2013 10:27pm
She is elegantly slim with waist length hair. My late father used to call her Princess Alice when she was a baby (he died when she was six) - he would probably say the same now if he was alive to see her.
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Anonymous
18th Apr 2013 4:25am
Nice write tl...strider
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18th Apr 2013 12:29pm
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Re: This Is My Girl
11th Oct 2014 00:07am
She must've been something then lol
Beautiful write, It kind of gave me the visual gist of what girl looks like
Beautiful write, It kind of gave me the visual gist of what girl looks like
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