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Painting a Masterpiece
Tonight,
My baby so sweet and so fine
On you I paint my best design
Using a precise stroke
and a thick bristled brush
No mood to hurry so I'm not gonna rush
Outlining your body first is how I begin
Starting with the black paint..ooohh
That's hot! your mind starts thinking
Now,comes the colors,
as thoughts dance inside your head
I'm brushing across your breasts,
as aerolas' I paint it red
Next, then come the nipples
I choose to paint them blue
They become erect, as I suspect
Passion's starting to build in you
All over your frame, I've left my name
It's my dandiest work of art
Looking like a candy colored rain,
and now comes the best part..
Dropping to my knees, I aim to please
teeth chew the panties off
I work the tongue ass to front,
and inside where's it's sweet, hot, and soft
Spend an hour, recieve your shower
Now beg for the meat that makes you scream
I pump you long, and pump you hard,
and finally fill you full of cream...
My baby so sweet and so fine
On you I paint my best design
Using a precise stroke
and a thick bristled brush
No mood to hurry so I'm not gonna rush
Outlining your body first is how I begin
Starting with the black paint..ooohh
That's hot! your mind starts thinking
Now,comes the colors,
as thoughts dance inside your head
I'm brushing across your breasts,
as aerolas' I paint it red
Next, then come the nipples
I choose to paint them blue
They become erect, as I suspect
Passion's starting to build in you
All over your frame, I've left my name
It's my dandiest work of art
Looking like a candy colored rain,
and now comes the best part..
Dropping to my knees, I aim to please
teeth chew the panties off
I work the tongue ass to front,
and inside where's it's sweet, hot, and soft
Spend an hour, recieve your shower
Now beg for the meat that makes you scream
I pump you long, and pump you hard,
and finally fill you full of cream...
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 17th Apr 2013
| Edited 19th Apr 2013
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Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
17th Apr 2013 6:36pm
This is a captivating write, the last stanza my favourite. A wonderful pen Poetikmind. :)
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re: Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
17th Apr 2013 8:11pm
Thank u my friend, I actually have a video of me reading this but it wouldn't upload to here! :( lol glad u liked it n appreciate it n you :)
Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 8:00pm
"god used an angel as his selection"
A beautifully penned poem, Poetikmind. Enjoyed the read thoroughly. The last stanza finishes this piece, perfectly. Well done! :)
Carlene
A beautifully penned poem, Poetikmind. Enjoyed the read thoroughly. The last stanza finishes this piece, perfectly. Well done! :)
Carlene
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re: Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
18th Apr 2013 4:25am
Thank you so much poetess, I'm flattered n humbled by your words, appreciate it as well :)
Anonymous
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18th Apr 2013 00:49am
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re: Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
18th Apr 2013 4:24am
Thank you, coming from a poetic beauty who should
know, that's a high honor! :) appreciate ya lady ;)
know, that's a high honor! :) appreciate ya lady ;)
Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
18th Apr 2013 9:22pm
Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
18th Apr 2013 10:48pm
Aaaawwww.... U gave me a huge smile that a sledgehammer couldn't wipe off my face! lol
Thank u, I'm indebted. I promise I will repay too :)
Thank u, I'm indebted. I promise I will repay too :)
Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
19th Apr 2013 3:36am
Re: Perfect, encased in a dream
19th Apr 2013 3:45am
Thanks a ton bro! But truly I think all your ink is Classic... So being mentioned in the same category as u I'm deeply honored! peace n love to u n urs bro!
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
19th Apr 2013 5:25pm
re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
20th Apr 2013 5:29am
Wow what very nice bing to say! Thank you so much, I truly appreciate that n I will be returning the favor soon :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
19th Apr 2013 5:28pm
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20th Apr 2013 5:30am
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
19th Apr 2013 8:24pm
O' my ...Wut do I say 2 dis here :)... Very sensual masterpiece u've created sweets! Def dig'n da vibe of da ink drip on dis Hot*Hot*Hott*:)....Bossy...
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
20th Apr 2013 5:32am
Aaawwww listen to the Hottest giving me shine :) thank u sweetness, truly grateful for all that is you! :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
20th Apr 2013 4:27pm
Spend an hour, receive your shower
Now beg for the meat that makes you scream
I pump you long, and pump you hard,
and finally fill you full of cream...sexily HOT LINES
Now beg for the meat that makes you scream
I pump you long, and pump you hard,
and finally fill you full of cream...sexily HOT LINES
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
20th Apr 2013 4:54pm
Aaaawww well, that's a big compliment coming from a woman who clearly knows HOT lol ur sweet, I appreciate ur comment n time :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2013 5:21am
Damn...the read alone was Hot
BUT the spoken word.....On Fire!!!!!
this piece...Sexy As Hell!!!!!!!!!
BUT the spoken word.....On Fire!!!!!
this piece...Sexy As Hell!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Painting a Masterpiece
23rd Apr 2013 5:23am
Aaaawww lol thank u! What a very sweet comment, I'm flattered n truly humbled by ur praise . :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
Anonymous
6th May 2013 6:14am
Thanks for pointing me to this, love. Love the poem and LOVE the read!
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
6th May 2013 6:37am
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
6th Jun 2013 4:37am
You trying to kill me...your spoken word along with your word was HOTTTTTT!!!!!
Nice ink on this...wow!
Nice ink on this...wow!
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
6th Jun 2013 4:42am
Lol aaawww baby... Muah!!! That was very sweet of you to say! I'm very flattered, thank u so much! :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
12th Jun 2013 4:36pm
An ooohhh gawsh moment. Loved this write. Had trouble hearing once the words of the tune kicked in but I re-read to ensure i missed not a drop of ink. Lovely Tyvm syn
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
12th Jun 2013 4:53pm
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
3rd Jul 2013 3:13pm
To read this and simultaneously hear your voice articulating the the erotic lines is an intense experience. Thanks for that, it's great!
Chi
Chi
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
3rd Jul 2013 3:21pm
Aaaawwww thank you!! I shall treasure this comment!
I love it so much, ur soooo sweet :)
I love it so much, ur soooo sweet :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
4th Jul 2013 2:56am
Wowza! That's the first word that comes to my mind upon reading such a finely written - and spoken - piece of work such as this one. I've never heard your voice before this, so it was quite a treat to have both the words and the feel of the words coming through with your passion and feel.
I very much so enjoyed reading this poem. I got some chills, that's for sure... pleasurable chills, at that. :D
I very much so enjoyed reading this poem. I got some chills, that's for sure... pleasurable chills, at that. :D
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4th Jul 2013 3:08am
Lol aaaawww thank u my sweetness I'm flattered
By ur words n appreciate them much :)
By ur words n appreciate them much :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 4:16am
Hot hot.... And hot!! Enjoyed!!
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6th Jul 2013 11:41am
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 3:46pm
Awesome!!!!!!! Love your voice. Well done! :)
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10th Jul 2013 3:52pm
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
5th Dec 2013 5:52am
this is how you make love...with words, thank you for sharing this poetikmind!
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
5th Dec 2013 12:40pm
Aaaaawwwww thank you! You're so sweet to say that... Appreciate you so much :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
10th Dec 2013 11:18pm
Poe this is so deliciously sexy and sizzling hot.. hearing and seeing you read it doubled the pleasure!!! much love Crim :)
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
10th Dec 2013 11:55pm
Aaaawwww lol too sweet of u to say my sweetie :) thanks a ton for your support always! :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
11th Dec 2013 4:24am
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11th Dec 2013 4:32am
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
9th Feb 2014 12:15pm
Wipes sweat off ... I love this ... Lology ... Outerr words so to speak..
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
9th Feb 2014 1:12pm
Aaaaawwwww precious...thank you my dear
happy to hear you enjoyed n truly appreciate your
support muah! :)
happy to hear you enjoyed n truly appreciate your
support muah! :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
16th Jul 2014 2:25pm
I had to check out some of your older work to se your progression. You had mad skills straight out of the gate. This is clever as it temps the sensual mind of the artist in us.
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
16th Jul 2014 2:43pm
Well I'm pleased to see someone venture back into my archives, because truth to tell I felt I was more
inspired then than I am now, because LIFE frankly
just keeps getting in the way! lol appreciate you much dude... :)
inspired then than I am now, because LIFE frankly
just keeps getting in the way! lol appreciate you much dude... :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
14th Nov 2014 5:06pm
You're a great artist, working with inspiration here :) Such an enjoyable piece...
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re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
14th Nov 2014 5:19pm
Wow... Thank u my friend! I'm honored n flattered
beyond words :) appreciate u much!
beyond words :) appreciate u much!
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
6th Jan 2015 7:39pm
re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
6th Jan 2015 7:58pm
Lol wow, u got me doing the same! lol thank u
soooo much, I'm very happy you enjoyed this lil spill :)
soooo much, I'm very happy you enjoyed this lil spill :)
Re: Painting a Masterpiece
3rd Feb 2015 4:21pm
re: Re: Painting a Masterpiece
3rd Feb 2015 4:27pm
Lol, how'd know I paint as well!? lol
Thank you, n no worries bout the window...I got defogger
u can use lol
Thank you, n no worries bout the window...I got defogger
u can use lol
Re. Painting a Masterpiece
2nd May 2016 2:00am
You're a hot inker. I bet you know all the strokes to make it a masterpiece.
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Re: Re. Painting a Masterpiece
2nd May 2016 2:08am
We'll I'd like to think I'm not half bad
especially since I love to give a woman ultimate pleasure :) thanks a ton, I'm flattered n grateful :)
especially since I love to give a woman ultimate pleasure :) thanks a ton, I'm flattered n grateful :)
Re. Painting a Masterpiece
22nd May 2016 2:27am
I apologize for not commenting sooner. However, this is an amazing write. You talk about mine being steamy, but I believe you may have me beat. Love the way you use your words.
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Re: Re. Painting a Masterpiece
22nd May 2016 2:32am
Re. Painting a Masterpiece
Anonymous
9th Jun 2016 2:22pm
Oh! I have only one word right now...Electrifying! That's all my mind can stammer out at present. 😉
Timid
Timid
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Re: Re. Painting a Masterpiece
9th Jun 2016 2:53pm
Well that gave me a "charge!" lol...
Truly, thank you for your sweet thoughts n your support, it's deeply appreciated :)
Truly, thank you for your sweet thoughts n your support, it's deeply appreciated :)
Anonymous
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20th Jul 2016 3:05pm
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Re: Re. Painting a Masterpiece
20th Jul 2016 6:13pm
Re. Painting a Masterpiece
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2016 12:52pm
So sensual! This oozes eroticism.
Nicely done!
Nicely done!
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22nd Jul 2016 2:03pm
Re. Painting a Masterpiece
29th Dec 2016 4:18am
Is there a love button somewhere inside this place??????!!!!!...Screaming this bad nuh bloodclawt [jamaican expletives] my bad just lost in it all i love this
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Re: Re. Painting a Masterpiece
29th Dec 2016 4:21am
Lol....aaaawwww....u sweet sweet beauty! Ty so much, I'm flattered big time :)
Re. Painting a Masterpiece
27th Apr 2017 10:39pm
Re: Re. Painting a Masterpiece
28th Apr 2017 00:35am
Aaaaawwwww....Ur pretty amazing yourself lady... But I do truly thank you, bunches for the support :)