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You are in my mind
The wind gave me today the smell of your beautiful hair.
I can feel it tonight. The smell is in my mind.
The sun gave me today the look of your smile.
I can see it tonight. The smile is in my eyes.
The rain gave me today the memory of your tears.
I can see them tonight. They are in my mind.
You are so far, but you are so close to me now.
I feel you, I smell you, I see you, I touch you.
You are in my mind.
I can feel it tonight. The smell is in my mind.
The sun gave me today the look of your smile.
I can see it tonight. The smile is in my eyes.
The rain gave me today the memory of your tears.
I can see them tonight. They are in my mind.
You are so far, but you are so close to me now.
I feel you, I smell you, I see you, I touch you.
You are in my mind.
Published 15th Apr 2013
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15th Apr 2013 11:06am
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15th Apr 2013 1:48pm
This is most delightful josephine beautifully constructed and carefully eorked through 'though still maintaining sincerety.Lovely
15th Apr 2013 8:32pm
Thank you very much for your comment. I appreciate it! I am not very experienced in the poetry!
15th Apr 2013 9:07pm
Experience in poetry is not as significant as one thinks. I consider a poem I wrote 40years ago to be my best. You write well,don't do yourself down . . . .leave that for others.
20th Apr 2013 6:19am
Thank you so much! Maybe this is an impression, that everybody has had once in his life:)
