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When one of your other personalities takes over...
Your...
Diabetic
Schizophrenic
Absolutely pa-thetic
Hear the sirens,hear the sirens
Somebody call the medic
Heart is racing
Tick. Tick
Tick goes the clock
Your time's run out
Out of faith
Out of luck
Out of...
Everything seems to stop now
We're all holding our breath
Now the curtain closes
Time's almost up
Yet the show must go
On and on the rambling in your head
Shh. Quiet. Pin drop.
Then all you hear is
[b]SCREAM[b]
Diabetic
Schizophrenic
Absolutely pa-thetic
Hear the sirens,hear the sirens
Somebody call the medic
Heart is racing
Tick. Tick
Tick goes the clock
Your time's run out
Out of faith
Out of luck
Out of...
Everything seems to stop now
We're all holding our breath
Now the curtain closes
Time's almost up
Yet the show must go
On and on the rambling in your head
Shh. Quiet. Pin drop.
Then all you hear is
[b]SCREAM[b]
Published 12th Apr 2013
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12th Apr 2013 5:52pm
12th Apr 2013 5:54pm
Anonymous
12th Apr 2013 6:46pm
Well written
Good work
Write on!
Good work
Write on!
12th Apr 2013 7:01pm
12th Apr 2013 7:06pm
12th Apr 2013 8:11pm
Anonymous
12th Apr 2013 10:58pm
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13th Apr 2013 6:05am
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13th Apr 2013 6:10am
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15th Apr 2013 11:10am
Even the arrangement of the words speaks for itself! The pattern of indentation in the left margin, the movement and diction--not literally, but I am, somehow, strongly reminded of Dante's Inferno, and Eliot's Little Gidding. There is a professional feel to the poem. The creativity is astounding.
Good work.
Good work.
15th Apr 2013 2:35pm
