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The State of My Heartbeat
Deliberated, it beats
Sheathed in bone and meat
Strokes, fluid and rhythmic
Measured and unhurried
Pulses racing anticipation
a flutter , passion beats
throbbing in carnal
Sensual yearning
apprehensive , it thumps
Defect, a single fissure
rhythm slows
Timid, caution
Step lightly it warms
Sheathed in bone and meat
Strokes, fluid and rhythmic
Measured and unhurried
Pulses racing anticipation
a flutter , passion beats
throbbing in carnal
Sensual yearning
apprehensive , it thumps
Defect, a single fissure
rhythm slows
Timid, caution
Step lightly it warms
Published 11th Apr 2013
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11th Apr 2013 11:47pm
ha, this just jumped my heartbeat a little! Very awesome, very up and down, just like the title. Great read, thanks for posting
11th Apr 2013 11:59pm
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yeah ditto!
dont call it a comeback.
how 'bout a staple'd singer. word.
one.
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yeah ditto!
dont call it a comeback.
how 'bout a staple'd singer. word.
one.
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17th Apr 2013 8:52pm
Thank you for reading this and adding a Great! comment...HellzLips.... I love you handle!
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12th Apr 2013 2:12am
You always amaze me. Awesome write. Very clever, shows your great imagination. :)
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Anonymous
12th Apr 2013 6:23pm
A perfectly metered piece here G,
I feel the down spiral in it and the darkness at the end..like a bitter ending indeed. A most beautiful and deep poem though, much love!
I feel the down spiral in it and the darkness at the end..like a bitter ending indeed. A most beautiful and deep poem though, much love!
17th Apr 2013 8:59pm
Thank you Miki
Your comment means so much....perhaps I'm improving....
Much Love
G
Your comment means so much....perhaps I'm improving....
Much Love
G
20th Apr 2013 1:26am
You did it again!:) LOL An excellent short piece, perfect pic. My favs:
Pulses racing anticipation
a flutter , passion beats
throbbing in carnal
Sensual yearning
apprehensive , it thumps
A clever, short masterpiece of heart palpitations!:)
Pulses racing anticipation
a flutter , passion beats
throbbing in carnal
Sensual yearning
apprehensive , it thumps
A clever, short masterpiece of heart palpitations!:)
21st Apr 2013 3:24am
ryteoutlet, you got my head spinning...LOL.....no really.
Thank you for your overwhelming comment
It's much appreciated
G
Thank you for your overwhelming comment
It's much appreciated
G
