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The Thirst
I long
to feel your weight upon me
almost crushing the wind
out of me as you press
your hot lips against mine
feeling your breath enter me
keeping me alive
as you wrap your arms
around my arching back
pulling me into you
filling me with your scent
and your breath
mixing with mine
our lips locked
your tongue searching
every part of my mouth
as you slide your
way inside me
our bodies pulsing
in rhythm to our
beating hearts
completely enwrapped
in each other
as if we were always
intertwined this way
our bodies melding
in perfect harmony with
the raw beauty of being
inside each other
of never wanting it
to end
to feel your weight upon me
almost crushing the wind
out of me as you press
your hot lips against mine
feeling your breath enter me
keeping me alive
as you wrap your arms
around my arching back
pulling me into you
filling me with your scent
and your breath
mixing with mine
our lips locked
your tongue searching
every part of my mouth
as you slide your
way inside me
our bodies pulsing
in rhythm to our
beating hearts
completely enwrapped
in each other
as if we were always
intertwined this way
our bodies melding
in perfect harmony with
the raw beauty of being
inside each other
of never wanting it
to end
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Re: The Thirst
Anonymous
6th Apr 2013 8:48pm
I like this. Well written piece, very sensual and loving :-)
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Re: The Thirst
6th Apr 2013 10:42pm
....and she shall drink liquid visions of him pleasuring her to quench this thirst that grows.
Oh this is sexyyyyyyyyy jemac! I know the thirst, I felt the thirst.....hell,Im somebody's thrist right now! lol....
Great Read! :)
Oh this is sexyyyyyyyyy jemac! I know the thirst, I felt the thirst.....hell,Im somebody's thrist right now! lol....
Great Read! :)
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re: Re: The Thirst
9th Apr 2013 4:54am
You make me smile Rain!! Thank You !! I believe I am someone's thirst too, somewhere...
Re: The Thirst
7th Apr 2013 7:42am
Romantic, sensual, warm, delicious... fave lines: our bodies pulsing in rhythm to our beating hearts.
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7th Apr 2013 7:45pm
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9th Apr 2013 4:58am
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7th Apr 2013 11:39pm
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9th Apr 2013 4:57am
Thank You kind Sir !, and Thank You for adding to your reading list, that means a lot!!
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Re: The Thirst
good
but all sojourns have to end
the plane
the train
the cars
bedding episodes
have to be taken
again and again
says again
but all sojourns have to end
the plane
the train
the cars
bedding episodes
have to be taken
again and again
says again
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re: Re: The Thirst
I know this is your genre, and that is totally cool...but I prefer not to use such brash terms on my own pages, or I would have done so...please refrain from words such as ...thank you....again
re: re: Re: The Thirst
19th Jan 2014 1:33am
I got the feed
and the lead
so i have told
again
to refrain
so i have mended/amending where necessary
the word again
sorry
my genre is not only this
except here miss
700 read me daily elsewhere
but the reads I have earned here
in such a short period
make me explode
so I now implode
and the lead
so i have told
again
to refrain
so i have mended/amending where necessary
the word again
sorry
my genre is not only this
except here miss
700 read me daily elsewhere
but the reads I have earned here
in such a short period
make me explode
so I now implode
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