Submissions by JiltedJohnny
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
If only I could soar - a lovely coop with Shilohverse
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well?
This is a lovely coop, if I may say so.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14866877
Shilohverse wrote the poem/lyrics and posted them on the 24th of August 2024.
I asked for her permission to take the poem with me on a 7 week trek in our tent, so I could get ideas for a song. And I got that permission. Needless to say I was very glad.
A couple of days after our return, I uploaded the draft to Shilohverse, and shortly after that this version.
Poem/lyrics:...
Hope this finds you well?
This is a lovely coop, if I may say so.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14866877
Shilohverse wrote the poem/lyrics and posted them on the 24th of August 2024.
I asked for her permission to take the poem with me on a 7 week trek in our tent, so I could get ideas for a song. And I got that permission. Needless to say I was very glad.
A couple of days after our return, I uploaded the draft to Shilohverse, and shortly after that this version.
Poem/lyrics:...
#healing
102 reads
4 Comments
Kissing
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
Inspired by Ms LaCarte’s (Lipskiss) butterfly kisses:
Kissing
All night and every night
Sounds a bit tiring I say
Kissing is so much lighter
Easy: all day - every day
W27jul2024
Thank you for the inspiration!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
Inspired by Ms LaCarte’s (Lipskiss) butterfly kisses:
Kissing
All night and every night
Sounds a bit tiring I say
Kissing is so much lighter
Easy: all day - every day
W27jul2024
Thank you for the inspiration!
Kind regards, Gus
#love
#romantic
211 reads
11 Comments
Onzijnen
Another Dutch/English one:
Er is veel eer gerelateerd geweld
Tegen Syrische vrouwen en meisjes
Mogelijk ook nog femicide
Toch nog sex toerisme reisjes?
Thailand spant de kroon - klinkt morbide
Hoe je als man munt uit hun kruis kunt slaan
Het uithuwelijken is bonafide
Gegadigden komen te voet en gaan
Pijlsnel als ze horen hoeveel geld…..
Beschaving komt al gauw in het nauw
Wie neemt het op voor de Syrische vrouw
W9jan2024
There is a lot of honor-related violence ...
Er is veel eer gerelateerd geweld
Tegen Syrische vrouwen en meisjes
Mogelijk ook nog femicide
Toch nog sex toerisme reisjes?
Thailand spant de kroon - klinkt morbide
Hoe je als man munt uit hun kruis kunt slaan
Het uithuwelijken is bonafide
Gegadigden komen te voet en gaan
Pijlsnel als ze horen hoeveel geld…..
Beschaving komt al gauw in het nauw
Wie neemt het op voor de Syrische vrouw
W9jan2024
There is a lot of honor-related violence ...
#MothersDay
#HumanRights
180 reads
2 Comments
Dentist
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well…
This time, another Dutch/English one:
Dentist
It was in late December around
The time the Savior was born
That my dentist kindly asked me
Gus, didn’t your girlfriend shave?
Tandarts
Het was eind december rond
De tijd dat de Heiland was geboren
Dat mijn tandarts mij vriendelijk vroeg
Gus, heeft je vriendin zich niet geschoren?
Hope you’ll like it!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well…
This time, another Dutch/English one:
Dentist
It was in late December around
The time the Savior was born
That my dentist kindly asked me
Gus, didn’t your girlfriend shave?
Tandarts
Het was eind december rond
De tijd dat de Heiland was geboren
Dat mijn tandarts mij vriendelijk vroeg
Gus, heeft je vriendin zich niet geschoren?
Hope you’ll like it!
Kind regards, Gus
#myself
149 reads
0 Comments
Brain f**ked
Hoi hoi
Lyrics: Monovox. Yes, DUP’s very own and much loved Monovox!
Another coop! And one that I’m proud of.
The link to the music:
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14742788
Please copy/paste in your browser, since DUP doesn’t provide for clickable links.
And this is what you get to see:
Monovox: Lyrics Jilted Johnny: Music 2024-383.2
shoegaze
Alternative > Shoegaze
What is Shoegaze
Charts
#83 today Peak #80
#1 in subgenre today
Author ...
Lyrics: Monovox. Yes, DUP’s very own and much loved Monovox!
Another coop! And one that I’m proud of.
The link to the music:
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14742788
Please copy/paste in your browser, since DUP doesn’t provide for clickable links.
And this is what you get to see:
Monovox: Lyrics Jilted Johnny: Music 2024-383.2
shoegaze
Alternative > Shoegaze
What is Shoegaze
Charts
#83 today Peak #80
#1 in subgenre today
Author ...
#lust
#erotic
#lover
#passion
#seductive
350 reads
5 Comments
Katrina
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14699361
Please copy/paste the link in your browser!
Another cooperation.
Lyrics by Kozo Pinkwillow
Voice by Chris Spruit
Katrina
[Chorus]
Katrina, ain't no surprise they named a storm after you
You catch my eyes with everything that you do
You're beautiful, it's true, but so dangerous too
Oh Katrina
Katrina, won't you step closer and blow me away
I'm hanging on to every word that you say ...
Hope this finds you well.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14699361
Please copy/paste the link in your browser!
Another cooperation.
Lyrics by Kozo Pinkwillow
Voice by Chris Spruit
Katrina
[Chorus]
Katrina, ain't no surprise they named a storm after you
You catch my eyes with everything that you do
You're beautiful, it's true, but so dangerous too
Oh Katrina
Katrina, won't you step closer and blow me away
I'm hanging on to every word that you say ...
#love
#sex
283 reads
6 Comments
Shibari - senryu
It’s knotfull thoughtful
It’s called Shibari - a knot
Is knot just a not
It’s called Shibari - a knot
Is knot just a not
#ILoveYou
271 reads
7 Comments
Ripples - coop between DUP’s talented RubyRedHeart (lyrics) and myself
This is a repost of RbyRedHeart’s Ripples.
I was captured by the poems dream like quality. I tried to express that with the song. A rather noisy dream, but a dream nevertheless.
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/ripples-coop-rubyredheart-lyrics-gus-music
Thank you @RubyRedHeart for a very nice coop.
The lyrics:
Ripples
Your scent on my skin
Satisfaction tingling within
Imagining your magical touch again
Were you with me in spirit?
I summoned you with my whispers
I beckoned you with my catching...
I was captured by the poems dream like quality. I tried to express that with the song. A rather noisy dream, but a dream nevertheless.
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/ripples-coop-rubyredheart-lyrics-gus-music
Thank you @RubyRedHeart for a very nice coop.
The lyrics:
Ripples
Your scent on my skin
Satisfaction tingling within
Imagining your magical touch again
Were you with me in spirit?
I summoned you with my whispers
I beckoned you with my catching...
#ILoveYou
366 reads
6 Comments
Two hearts in the snow - cooperation with MichaelA
This song was part of a ‘same lyrics challenge’, when everyone involved made a song, based on MichaelA’s lovely lyrics.
As the first advent started today, it seemed like a good idea to dig this one up.
Instead of a syrupy Christmas song, I made a festival one.
Please copy paste this link in your browser, as DUP still hasn’t answered my prayers for clickable links:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/2018-259-5-same-lyrics-challenge
And here‘s the most important thing of this challenge, @MichaelA ’s beautiful lyrics:
Two...
As the first advent started today, it seemed like a good idea to dig this one up.
Instead of a syrupy Christmas song, I made a festival one.
Please copy paste this link in your browser, as DUP still hasn’t answered my prayers for clickable links:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/2018-259-5-same-lyrics-challenge
And here‘s the most important thing of this challenge, @MichaelA ’s beautiful lyrics:
Two...
#love
#Christmas
#lover
313 reads
4 Comments
As we lay - a cooperation with Miss Tess
The link. Please copy/paste in your browser:
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/as-we-lay
As We Lay
Love.
Lust.
Fuel my desire.
Her divine aroma
Sets my senses on fire.
Taking me higher.
Don’t want to come down.
On a mission to explore her.
Ecstasy bound.
Lips so soft and sweet
As they become one with mine.
So wet and luscious.
Inhibitions left behind.
My tongue searches
For her delectable essence.
Probing deeper and deeper.
I just might keep her
Entangled...
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/as-we-lay
As We Lay
Love.
Lust.
Fuel my desire.
Her divine aroma
Sets my senses on fire.
Taking me higher.
Don’t want to come down.
On a mission to explore her.
Ecstasy bound.
Lips so soft and sweet
As they become one with mine.
So wet and luscious.
Inhibitions left behind.
My tongue searches
For her delectable essence.
Probing deeper and deeper.
I just might keep her
Entangled...
#love
#lust
#lover
373 reads
8 Comments
Expensive habits
Sometimes cheap habits are even worse than expensive habits. Please consider that when you are reading this.
And this one’s called:
Expensive habits
Jill smiles and winks for good measure
‘I am here to make amends
I’m destined for greater things’
And slid her hands down Lenny’s pants
His hands lingered a bit too long
On Jill’s creamy thighs
Hands are not supposed to have brains
But Lenny’s hands thought: nice
A marriage is just like cleaning
It’s a job that’s never done
So shut up, grit your teeth and...
And this one’s called:
Expensive habits
Jill smiles and winks for good measure
‘I am here to make amends
I’m destined for greater things’
And slid her hands down Lenny’s pants
His hands lingered a bit too long
On Jill’s creamy thighs
Hands are not supposed to have brains
But Lenny’s hands thought: nice
A marriage is just like cleaning
It’s a job that’s never done
So shut up, grit your teeth and...
#courage
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
450 reads
10 Comments
Lights on - a cooperation - lyrics written by her
Hoi hoi
I hope you’ll enjoy this cooperation!
The poem/lyrics are truly wonderful!
I’ve set ‘her’ poem to music.
You can paste this link to SoundCloud to listen.
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/lights-on-cooperation-with-her-2022-355-track-7
Lights On
Oh, eyes filled with lust
Showing your appetite
Seeing my amazement
For finding you so tight
I prefer the lights on
Where I can see
(Where I can see)
Your face, your face
As you are fucking me
Now...
I hope you’ll enjoy this cooperation!
The poem/lyrics are truly wonderful!
I’ve set ‘her’ poem to music.
You can paste this link to SoundCloud to listen.
https://soundcloud.com/user-973930366/lights-on-cooperation-with-her-2022-355-track-7
Lights On
Oh, eyes filled with lust
Showing your appetite
Seeing my amazement
For finding you so tight
I prefer the lights on
Where I can see
(Where I can see)
Your face, your face
As you are fucking me
Now...
#lust
#erotic
#lover
#sensual
#passion
378 reads
4 Comments
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